Gaucho's Debut Story

I've already sent my feedback, but I'll just post this here....

WOW.

Some authors can make porn into POETRY.

MP ;)
 
My attention was caught ....and held on to for sometime after.

WOW! <~~~said almost breathless
 
What a truly masterful writer Gaucho is. Gives me a level of expertise and eroticism at which to aim.

~way impressed~
cym
 
Ain't he to die for? Reading his erotica is like sipping fine wine while laying naked on silk sheets.

Now you can see why I pestered him so long to get this posted. Help me pressure him to write more.
 
Takes my breath away...

Delicious. Thanks WS for showing us the way and thanks to Gaucho for the submission. Inspiring.
 
Bravo!

Well, I'm hooked.

Encore, encore! Or is it Author Author!

My compliments to the 'artiste' who can make my perceptions of the drudgery of work make a 180 ° turn!

I like your style. I'd also like to know where you work! :D
 
Whispersecret said:
Reading his erotica is like sipping fine wine while laying naked on silk sheets.

Now you can see why I pestered him so long to get this posted. Help me pressure him to write more.

First off, let me give a giant THANK YOU to all of you who took the time to read my story and especially to those of you who posted on this thread or who contacted me via email. Your response has been overwhelming and I can't tell you how much I appreciate it.

That said, let me offer a very special thank you to Whisper for not only starting this thread but also for all the help she gave me in the crafting of "Office Hours". I can honestly say that without her help, the story would not read as well as it does.

Without question, you are a "true friend and a good writer". A great big MUAH on both titties, baby. You deserve it.

And yes, Gaucho will return. :)
 
Please. Editing your story was effortless. It was already so well-crafted that there was little I had to say about it, except "Wow, this part is exquisite," and "Oh, man, I have to go get my vibrator now," etc.

Still, I love them nipple kisses.
 
Gaucho...fogive me for highjacking your thread...


WHISPER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

YOU'RE BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

DON'T EVER STAYG AWAY SO LONG AGAIN !!!!!!


Okay...sorry. I'm done now.

MP ;)
 
Hijack away, MP. I'm a firm believer that the best things in life are meant to be shared.

And Whisper definitely qualifies. ;)
 
Hmmmm.... I mean, WOW

Jeez, Louize! I hate this kind of stuff! More of this and NO ONE will read my crap anymore!

Gaucho...damn, son! That was pure poetic smut in it's most wonderful glory. I'm gonna go back and steal some of that wonderful, sensual, erotic imagery. Not that I'll ever admit to it, mind you. A nearly perfectly written tale that does it all on a single page.
VERY well done.
And Whisper... if you worked magic, as Gaucho suggests, maybe I'll subject you to some of my crap. Maybe you can dilute twenty pages of my rambling smut into the fine stuff that was presented here...
 
Excellent story Gaucho! I thoroughly enjoyed it. Your descriptives were keen and your written word came across as very professional. Whisper was right, you do have talent. You are lucky to have her on your side, she is a great editor. How do I know? Hmmmmm, she is mine too. Keep up the amazing work...you did fantastic!

Hugs KitKat
 
Re: Hmmmm.... I mean, WOW

Jeez, Louize! I hate this kind of stuff! More of this and NO ONE will read my crap anymore!

Mark, I know exactly what you mean. Luckily he's slower at production than I am.

Also, congratulations on Story of the Year. Damn you! Heh heh. I really coveted that award! Oh well, I'll set my sights on next year.

And Whisper... if you worked magic, as Gaucho suggests, maybe I'll subject you to some of my crap. Maybe you can dilute twenty pages of my rambling smut into the fine stuff that was presented here...

No way in hell. As I said before, the poetry was there before I even took up my red pen. All I did with his story is point out some places where I was confused or had a difference of opinion regarding word choice. THAT'S ALL. It was fucking great before he gave it to me.

MP, WOOF!
 
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