GA's appeal for punc, grammar, and general fuck-up check

[geronimo_appleby]

I have a 9000(ish) word piece that is need of some attention.

I'm not looking for anything too heavy -- just spelling, punc, and any obvious errors checking.

A lady exacts retribution on a former lover by enticing him into a bi-sexual encounter.

Any takers?

 

[adetaildiva]

I have a 9000(ish) word piece that is need of some attention.

I'm not looking for anything too heavy -- just spelling, punc, and any obvious errors checking.

A lady exacts retribution on a former lover by enticing him into a bi-sexual encounter.

Any takers?

9K? *swallows hard* Um, how soon do you need it back? she asks carefully

 

[geronimo_appleby]

9K? *swallows hard* Um, how soon do you need it back? she asks carefully

as soon as is reasonable.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

job done.