if you've read good ones on here so be it. though i seem to have not noticed many good gangbang stories on literotica. i'd like to either see or write one myself with extreme detail and raunchiness. three men on one woman is fine, but i think it should step up while remaining elegant. try many men. i was also thinking about throwing in some sort of background theme. that's the toughest part, i know what i'd write for the action but to give it a scenario that builds into it. should it be a wife doing a gang for her husband or what? help me out, or i'll help any authors out to write this story together.
gangbang story, again
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How about this. A woman suddenly finds herself homeless through a series of poor choices and bad luck. She is walking along a parking lot of a fast food place smelling the cooking meat which makes her stomach turn, but she is broke. On her shoulder is her backpack containing her lot in life.
A man heading to his car sees her and offers her something to eat from his bag. She is prode and resists. He lays it on the line for her; showing her how stupid it is for her not to accept.
They share his food on the curb next to his car, and they talk. She opens up to him. She then appologizes for laying all this on him. She has no where to go. He offers to help her out, but again she is resistant. She doesn't want anything just handed to her.
He tells her that he is throwing a party for one of his friends, and if she helped him out with the setup he would pay her. She studies him and convinces herself that he looks like an honest guy. She accepts.
He takes her to his home, and she is immediately impressed. She finds that he is a bachelar living alone in the big house. He shows her to a room where she could cleanup.
She notices that he isn't looking at her like most men do. When he talks to her, his eyes are looking at hers and not at her boobs.
She comes out of the shower, dig through her bag to find that her clothes are all sowered at best. She does the best she can before rejoining him.
He sees her discomfort in her rinkled clothes. He smiles at her warmly and ask that she come with him to get some things at a store. He purchases a few nice things for her, in spite of her relucants. She was grateful. She changes into one of the outfits in the store, and he only commented that she didn't look bad at all. She felt that he was being honest and not just flattering. Her trust in him was building by the minute.
They went from place to place purchasing items for the party. It was only going to be two other guys, and she thought that it was a little much, but she withheld her judgement.
He told her that he wanted her to serve drinks at the party. He added his concern that the two other guys might try to get fresh with her. She saw the concerned look on his face. She felt that she was tough enough to handle it. He told her that it wouldn't be good for him if she did something like slapped their face. She swallowed hard, nodding her head that she would allow any advances to go unchecked.
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I'm thinking that showing a build up of trust would make for a better story. Especially if she becomes attracted to him.
A man heading to his car sees her and offers her something to eat from his bag. She is prode and resists. He lays it on the line for her; showing her how stupid it is for her not to accept.
They share his food on the curb next to his car, and they talk. She opens up to him. She then appologizes for laying all this on him. She has no where to go. He offers to help her out, but again she is resistant. She doesn't want anything just handed to her.
He tells her that he is throwing a party for one of his friends, and if she helped him out with the setup he would pay her. She studies him and convinces herself that he looks like an honest guy. She accepts.
He takes her to his home, and she is immediately impressed. She finds that he is a bachelar living alone in the big house. He shows her to a room where she could cleanup.
She notices that he isn't looking at her like most men do. When he talks to her, his eyes are looking at hers and not at her boobs.
She comes out of the shower, dig through her bag to find that her clothes are all sowered at best. She does the best she can before rejoining him.
He sees her discomfort in her rinkled clothes. He smiles at her warmly and ask that she come with him to get some things at a store. He purchases a few nice things for her, in spite of her relucants. She was grateful. She changes into one of the outfits in the store, and he only commented that she didn't look bad at all. She felt that he was being honest and not just flattering. Her trust in him was building by the minute.
They went from place to place purchasing items for the party. It was only going to be two other guys, and she thought that it was a little much, but she withheld her judgement.
He told her that he wanted her to serve drinks at the party. He added his concern that the two other guys might try to get fresh with her. She saw the concerned look on his face. She felt that she was tough enough to handle it. He told her that it wouldn't be good for him if she did something like slapped their face. She swallowed hard, nodding her head that she would allow any advances to go unchecked.
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I'm thinking that showing a build up of trust would make for a better story. Especially if she becomes attracted to him.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=142154&page=1
I hope this link works and takes you to Dusty's story, I'm not quite sure if it would be considered a gang bang but I thought it was really good.
I hope this link works and takes you to Dusty's story, I'm not quite sure if it would be considered a gang bang but I thought it was really good.
ok, will try again
The story is "The Wager" by Dustystar
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=142154&page=1
(hoping this link works)
The story is "The Wager" by Dustystar
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=142154&page=1
(hoping this link works)
Wife Gangbanging
I believe what is wanted is a wife gangbanging a large number of me, not just a few of her hubby's buddys?
Maybe taken hostage by a motorcycle gang who tie the husband up and forces him to watch 17 guys rape her every orfice. Much to the husband's dismay his wife begins to enjoy the unacustom rough sex and begins to climax with these animals pumping their vile cum down her throat, into her womb and far up into her dirt chute.
The husband watches horrified, since he had a vascectomy years ago the stupid bitch was not on the pill!
I believe what is wanted is a wife gangbanging a large number of me, not just a few of her hubby's buddys?
Maybe taken hostage by a motorcycle gang who tie the husband up and forces him to watch 17 guys rape her every orfice. Much to the husband's dismay his wife begins to enjoy the unacustom rough sex and begins to climax with these animals pumping their vile cum down her throat, into her womb and far up into her dirt chute.
The husband watches horrified, since he had a vascectomy years ago the stupid bitch was not on the pill!
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