gang bang story

[BlackSnake]

I show a friend some of my stories and the first thing he asked was if I had a gang bang story.

"...you know where one guy...the good guy sets the girl up, get her naked in the tube and then let another guy in....the bad guy...."

I feel that this lean towards rape. I would like ideas where there is more of a natural progression. If there are two or more guys, they all make the girl feel wanted, sexy, hot, and horny.

 

[bigbear1020]

I showed your pics to my wife she went nuts. she loves big black men. last summer my wife was in a gang bang. we were at a pool party there was drinks and dancing well my wife went into the house with the guy he was dancing with and they went to a backroom in the basement and started to fuck, a guy walked in on them and the next thing she knew more guys came into the room she got fucked by five in all. They they were all black and she was in heaven. I'm white she's Indian as in west Indian.

 

[BlackSnake]

Bigbear,

Thanks for checking out the pics. It sounds like a very interesting story, but where were you? Could you have gotten off on watching those guys do your wife? It sounds like it would make a very interesting story, but it needs a little more guts....

Was there talk of her getting it on with one guy if she wanted, and it turned out that his four friends wanted their turns?

 

[bigbear1020]

were in NY and yes i could and would have gotten off we do stuff together but that time it just happened like that. the first time i watched her with another man she was 21 and we were just married six months we wnet to a adult movie theater and ended up in our car with her getting fucked by a guy as i watched and jerked off

 

[BlackSnake]

were in NY and yes i could and would have gotten off we do stuff together but that time it just happened like that. the first time i watched her with another man she was 21 and we were just married six months we wnet to a adult movie theater and ended up in our car with her getting fucked by a guy as i watched and jerked off

Cool! I bet the guy was surprised that it was ok with you? Was it a planned outing - party that you knew about in advance? This is good story stuff.

 

[bigbear1020]

no wasn't planed it was a chance to see if i could get her to do it and she did. it was scary after we used no comdoms and he came in her
we went nuts after that first time pm me if u want to hear more

 

[Satyr1]

You wife sounds like a real party girl

 

[frustratedpoodle]

The Fine Line

I couldn't resist. I have to throw in my two cents here...

As a woman, the gang bang concept is shaky for me. My hubby likes to watch it in porn, and I will admit to liking it too. However, the second it looks more like a rape than a consenting thing, then I am immediately turned off. I mean, not just turned off to where I can get hot again if I view or think about something else, but turned off to the point where sex is out of the question for at least a day or two.

Yet, when done correctly, it can be very erotic for me.

My advice to you is to make the female character the initiator. Perhaps if she is the "good girl", make it so that she's only playing the part, and subtly manipulating her male partners into the scenario rather than the other way around. Make /them/ believe they are behind it, but have the girl privately snickering to herself and maybe thinking, "I'm not that drunk..."

Dunno. There is a fine line there... look forward to reading!

The Poodle

 

[BlackSnake]

Re: The Fine Line

I couldn't resist. I have to throw in my two cents here...

As a woman, the gang bang concept is shaky for me. My hubby likes to watch it in porn, and I will admit to liking it too. However, the second it looks more like a rape than a consenting thing, then I am immediately turned off. I mean, not just turned off to where I can get hot again if I view or think about something else, but turned off to the point where sex is out of the question for at least a day or two.

Yet, when done correctly, it can be very erotic for me.

My advice to you is to make the female character the initiator. Perhaps if she is the "good girl", make it so that she's only playing the part, and subtly manipulating her male partners into the scenario rather than the other way around. Make /them/ believe they are behind it, but have the girl privately snickering to herself and maybe thinking, "I'm not that drunk..."

Dunno. There is a fine line there... look forward to reading!

The Poodle

If she first manipulates the situation, and then comes across as submissive, then I would think that she would loose control.

However, if she makes them beg to fuck her, then I could believe them having desire for her opposed to being a glory-hole.

 

[frustratedpoodle]

True True....

Good point, BlackSnake. Isn't it weird how we women can be so touchy?

But yeah, if she comes across as submissive, and it's because she wants to, then you are right. It would be easy for the manipulation to go the other way instead.

Then the question becomes, how do you define the "good girl"? Why is a "good girl" making these guys beg for her? An altered state is too much like date rape in and of itself, aside from drugs and alcohol cheapening the lack of inhibition in a consenting situation. Is she doing it as a once off thing because she knows these guys and knows that she can get away with it? Is she doing it because the good girl act is just an act until you get her "alone"? Granted, it's a gang bang story, not a Hemingway novel, but those little details count...

The Poodle

 

[BlackSnake]

Re: True True....

Good point, BlackSnake. Isn't it weird how we women can be so touchy?

But yeah, if she comes across as submissive, and it's because she wants to, then you are right. It would be easy for the manipulation to go the other way instead.

Then the question becomes, how do you define the "good girl"? Why is a "good girl" making these guys beg for her? An altered state is too much like date rape in and of itself, aside from drugs and alcohol cheapening the lack of inhibition in a consenting situation. Is she doing it as a once off thing because she knows these guys and knows that she can get away with it? Is she doing it because the good girl act is just an act until you get her "alone"? Granted, it's a gang bang story, not a Hemingway novel, but those little details count...

The Poodle

Absolutely, the character has to make sense.

She doesn't have to be a "Good Girl", just a good friends. Guys with hot friends want to screw them, but don't because their friendship is important to them.

If she initiates the situation in a group setting, it would make sense that the guys would go along with her and treat her right, because they are friends. In that type of situation, it would make the group stronger. Everyone would be able to join in.

 

[frustratedpoodle]

That Would Work

Well, that makes it a lot more plausible. Maybe she's one of those "one of the guys" type of girls that has a lot of guy friends and gets along with all of them so well that this sort of situation would be cool for them all, but pretty much without consequences the next day.

I think you've got the right idea. Can't wait to read it!

 

[bigbear1020]

I let my wife read the responces and ask it if she was in control her answer was yes. if she didn't want it to happen she would have left after she found out they were not a lone. she knew what they were thinking and went for it.
and for my two cents we have been married for 14 years now and have been active swingings for almost all those years, we have been to parties where there is a open party room where all things go and canbe looked at as a gang bang too. most of the women in the room had sex with more then a few men.
and Please we only have safe sex so please judge us kindly.
yes like many we have in the past done dumb things and have been very lucky. but we have learn safe is the only way, we want to grow old together.

 

[BlackSnake]

I let my wife read the responces and ask it if she was in control her answer was yes. if she didn't want it to happen she would have left after she found out they were not a lone. she knew what they were thinking and went for it.
and for my two cents we have been married for 14 years now and have been active swingings for almost all those years, we have been to parties where there is a open party room where all things go and canbe looked at as a gang bang too. most of the women in the room had sex with more then a few men.
and Please we only have safe sex so please judge us kindly.
yes like many we have in the past done dumb things and have been very lucky. but we have learn safe is the only way, we want to grow old together.

BigBear, in general, could you not see how things could get out of control? I mean, once the action has started.

You won't get any judgements from me. Only that you're one lucky guy.

 

[frustratedpoodle]

I let my wife read the responces and ask it if she was in control her answer was yes. if she didn't want it to happen she would have left after she found out they were not a lone. she knew what they were thinking and went for it.
and for my two cents we have been married for 14 years now and have been active swingings for almost all those years, we have been to parties where there is a open party room where all things go and canbe looked at as a gang bang too. most of the women in the room had sex with more then a few men.
and Please we only have safe sex so please judge us kindly.
yes like many we have in the past done dumb things and have been very lucky. but we have learn safe is the only way, we want to grow old together.

No judging on my part either. I am sure y'all are having more fun than I am, and that's saying a lot cause I am having a good time myself!

For the record, I have never been raped or abused or anything, which I think is important to mention given my opinion on gang bangs. If I don't think the woman is having fun, all eroticism goes out the window for me. There was a porn I saw once where the guys were having their way with this woman, and one had her in a chokehold, then literally threw her down into the next position. Maybe she actually liked this, but it seemed too borderline violent for me. Unless a situation is totally safe and there is control on the woman's part, it makes me uncomfortable, simply because it is too easy for two or more men to overpower a woman. The notion of that is not a turn on for me, as much as I like to be "manhandled" during sex.

The Poodle

 

[cuzinevil]

gang bangs

The only gang bang I was involved with was back in 79' Things were a lot free'r then...
My lady had set it up herself, and then asked me to come along. I think the fact that I was present prevented anyone from getting out of hand.
The guys however had no idea what was going to happen, untill it happened!
She, however still had complete control. I agree with poodle in that if there is any hint of forced sex, I find it a real turn off.

 

[bigbear1020]

Asked again if she felt she was in total control Her answer was a "YES" she to finds the idea of rape or forced sex a turn off as do I. As for gang bang's they happen every day if your looking for them, and even easyer if your a women who wants to be in one.

 

[ernestnolan]

Cheer Leaders

It doesn't seem to be the same for a reader unless there is some sort of coaxing or plan that is acted out to bring about the gangbang.

An example:

It is not very interesting to the reader if the cheer leaders promised to entertain the team on the way home if they win the game.

 

[BlackSnake]

Girl wants to be banged

OK, Characters Jeff and Christy:

Jeff has over his four best friends. They are all married and Christy know their wives. Christy usually stay out of the men's way while they watch sports or play poker. She had been having this fantasy of being ravished by serveral guys. She told her fantasy to her husband and found him very excited about the prospect. Jeff brought up the subject about sex, and the men were more than willing to add their two cents in.

She could her their boasting about fucking women clear in the other room where she was. The thought of being fucked by all the strong men made her pussy begin to throb. She had to cool herself down and decided get something to drink from the kitchen.

Dressed in her pink biking shorts and sports bra that hide not one inch of her figure, she bent over to get a bottled water from the frig.

"Wohoo!" Jeff called out looking at his wife's nicely shaped butt-cheeks.

Christy looked back smiling.

"He did it," Jeff said pointing at one of his friends while the others laughed.

"Thank you," she said going over to the man who had been singled out. "I've been working hard on it. Do you really think it's ok." She turned her ass to the man.

"It sure does," Jeff and the other men spoke up.

"It feels really nice too," Jeff said squeezing one of her shapely cheeks.

Christy went around to the other side of the table. "I expect you to say that. Does my ass feel nice?" she asked another man.

The man looked at Jeff who was knodding his approval. The men had been talking about who they thought was sexy and all the men agreed that Christy was tops. The man put his hand on Christy's ass and gave it a little squeeze, and then agreed that it was very nice....

 

[cuzinevil]

gang bang

I like it! A very promising start!

 

[frustratedpoodle]

Re: Girl wants to be banged

OK, Characters Jeff and Christy:

Jeff has over his four best friends. They are all married and Christy know their wives. Christy usually stay out of the men's way while they watch sports or play poker. She had been having this fantasy of being ravished by serveral guys. She told her fantasy to her husband and found him very excited about the prospect. Jeff brought up the subject about sex, and the men were more than willing to add their two cents in.

She could her their boasting about fucking women clear in the other room where she was. The thought of being fucked by all the strong men made her pussy begin to throb. She had to cool herself down and decided get something to drink from the kitchen.

Dressed in her pink biking shorts and sports bra that hide not one inch of her figure, she bent over to get a bottled water from the frig.

"Wohoo!" Jeff called out looking at his wife's nicely shaped butt-cheeks.

Christy looked back smiling.

"He did it," Jeff said pointing at one of his friends while the others laughed.

"Thank you," she said going over to the man who had been singled out. "I've been working hard on it. Do you really think it's ok." She turned her ass to the man.

"It sure does," Jeff and the other men spoke up.

"It feels really nice too," Jeff said squeezing one of her shapely cheeks.

Christy went around to the other side of the table. "I expect you to say that. Does my ass feel nice?" she asked another man.

The man looked at Jeff who was knodding his approval. The men had been talking about who they thought was sexy and all the men agreed that Christy was tops. The man put his hand on Christy's ass and gave it a little squeeze, and then agreed that it was very nice....

Good work, BlackSnake! Can't wait to read more!

The Poodle

 

[BlackSnake]

I'll give it a go...

 

[lexium]

I would love to read it

 

[BlackSnake]

I would love to read it

I'm happy to see you again. I will have to make it special for you

 

[lexium]

I'm happy to see you again. I will have to make it special for you

Make it special for yourself that way I know I would love it...