AmbrosiaCaress
Phoenix Rising!!!
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(OOC: This story was originally started by another writer under the title Galatic Prison - Pegasus... that story has been abandoned, but I happened upon it as one of the participants bumped it up... hoping to renew interest... I PMed Him (Geryon) ... and we discussed this story with our own twist to it.. Since I did not want to copy what the other writer had in mind... Sooo... this is our twist on this story... (Geryon and AmbrosiaCaress)
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This is the last post... by Geryon.. for His character Carver... in that original story... this is where we are picking up the story... my first post.. which will come after this one.. will introduce my character...
Carver walked, only a bit shakily, down the twisting and turning bleached-white halls of the compound, led by a number of armed men that any onlooker would have assumed unnecessarily high. The original six guards who had originally arrived to haul him off to his torture had probably thought they would be more than enough. That was, of course, before Carver had nearly killed four of them. Their frantic calls for backup still amused him. Right now there were four men on gurneys being carted away to the medical wing with broken arms, cracked ribs, shattered faces and very bruised egoes. This also amused Carver, even as the grim procession reached a wide set of doors that led to the training area.
The room was large, with padded floors and a high-vaulted ceiling. A number of people in gray sweatsuits were sparring, lifting weights, or otherwise excercising at a number of stations set around the perimeter of the room. The centre was clear though, with a large white square painted on the blue floor mats. A group of sweaty organisms, some possibly human, stood chatting animatedly amongst themselves on the far side of that square. His guards ushered Carver out into the clearing to face the group. Slowly, one by one, they realized he was there and fell silent. Not very disciplined, Carver thought. He hoped, not so much for their safety as for his own enjoyment, that they were not trainees. His hopes were not high, though.
One scruffy man stepped forward into the square with Carver, smiling ingratiatingly.
The following silence was disturbed only by the man's screams as he was hauled off down a connecting corridor. The eyes of the other men followed the bloody smear across the floor and out the door before returning to Carver, standing calmly in the centre of the square. Some fidgeted uncomfortably. A few sharp words from an instructor informed the men that this is what they would contend with every day as Pegasus guards, but that no matter how alien their charge appeared, he could always be brought down with the proper application of force. A nearby cabinet unlocked and slid open of its own accord, revealing rows of shiny batons, which the new recruits hastily armed themselves with. Under the scrutiny of their instructor and the veteran guards that had accompanied Carver, the trainees proceeded to conduct a number of training excercises with him as their subject. Needless to say, a small fraction of those recruits walked away at the end of the session; even fewer walked away unharmed.
Several minuted later, Carver's bruised and bloody body was flung onto his cell bed, a clean set of clothes and boots placed on the floor beneath it. He was barely conscious, and drifted off into sleep moments after his escorts left the room.
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If you want to read the original thread.. again the name is Galatic Prison - Pegasus
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This is the last post... by Geryon.. for His character Carver... in that original story... this is where we are picking up the story... my first post.. which will come after this one.. will introduce my character...
Carver walked, only a bit shakily, down the twisting and turning bleached-white halls of the compound, led by a number of armed men that any onlooker would have assumed unnecessarily high. The original six guards who had originally arrived to haul him off to his torture had probably thought they would be more than enough. That was, of course, before Carver had nearly killed four of them. Their frantic calls for backup still amused him. Right now there were four men on gurneys being carted away to the medical wing with broken arms, cracked ribs, shattered faces and very bruised egoes. This also amused Carver, even as the grim procession reached a wide set of doors that led to the training area.
The room was large, with padded floors and a high-vaulted ceiling. A number of people in gray sweatsuits were sparring, lifting weights, or otherwise excercising at a number of stations set around the perimeter of the room. The centre was clear though, with a large white square painted on the blue floor mats. A group of sweaty organisms, some possibly human, stood chatting animatedly amongst themselves on the far side of that square. His guards ushered Carver out into the clearing to face the group. Slowly, one by one, they realized he was there and fell silent. Not very disciplined, Carver thought. He hoped, not so much for their safety as for his own enjoyment, that they were not trainees. His hopes were not high, though.
One scruffy man stepped forward into the square with Carver, smiling ingratiatingly.
The following silence was disturbed only by the man's screams as he was hauled off down a connecting corridor. The eyes of the other men followed the bloody smear across the floor and out the door before returning to Carver, standing calmly in the centre of the square. Some fidgeted uncomfortably. A few sharp words from an instructor informed the men that this is what they would contend with every day as Pegasus guards, but that no matter how alien their charge appeared, he could always be brought down with the proper application of force. A nearby cabinet unlocked and slid open of its own accord, revealing rows of shiny batons, which the new recruits hastily armed themselves with. Under the scrutiny of their instructor and the veteran guards that had accompanied Carver, the trainees proceeded to conduct a number of training excercises with him as their subject. Needless to say, a small fraction of those recruits walked away at the end of the session; even fewer walked away unharmed.
Several minuted later, Carver's bruised and bloody body was flung onto his cell bed, a clean set of clothes and boots placed on the floor beneath it. He was barely conscious, and drifted off into sleep moments after his escorts left the room.
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If you want to read the original thread.. again the name is Galatic Prison - Pegasus