Fund raising miscalculation - Lost innocence

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[THE_TRUE_GOD]

Simple lottery. Pick the correct six numbers from 50 is 700 million to one. Punter picks six numbers, somebody's lap-top picks six random numbers. Bottom prize is two correct, then three, then four, etc.

If it's someone's lap-top doing the picking, her bad luck is actually a fix!

 

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[Sean Renaud]

Well I think that a lottery could work. you know you needed to pick the right 6 numbers and she thought they had to be six numbers in order. Instead you just needed all six numbers. 18-20 steps is too damn many, a lot of your readers are going to stop reading unless you are doing a great job of keeping the energy moving. On the flip side all 10 people that read it to the end will give you a 5 out of five so your rating will be killer.

 

[rthnck]

What happens in Vegas stays in Vegas

Rent a slot machine and because they are renting it they get to set the odds. Set the odds for various combinations. As many as you want. 3-cherries takes her cherry. 3-clubs takes her ass, 3-hearts gets you some oral, etc. Your adult population has to be large enough to let you get a good sampling. You then have two options. Either the mathematical odds are miscalculated so that all the prizes will be won with your adult population pulling the lever or because you're renting it, it turns out to be an older machine that can be manipulated (cheated) with magnets or something similar to cheat the odds. The entire population is in on it and and all participate in the cheating or someone close to the goody-goody's works the cheat and enjoys watching the results.

 

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[rthnck]

Story ideas are easy. Research is hard

Google

Here's where you can get your very own slotmachine
http://www.slotmachines4less.com

I put in the following search in google with plenty of links about beating slot machines, how they work, how the odds are calculated, etc.

"slot machines" "inner workings"

Here are two links to get you started. The second one had some pay combinations. 17 of them which is pretty close to what you were looking for. Happy Researching....

http://robison.casinocitytimes.com/articles/15709.html

http://72.14.207.104/search?q=cache...ner+workings"+cherry&hl=en&gl=us&ct=clnk&cd=9

PAY COMBINATIONS
1 CHERRY ANY ANY
2 ANY CHERRY CHERRY
3 CHERRY CHERRY ANY
4 ANY CHERRY CHERRY
5 CHERRY ANY CHERRY
6 CHERRY CHERRY CHERRY
7 BAR ORANGE ORANGE
8 ORANGE ORANGE BAR
9 ORANGE ORANGE ORANGE
10 BAR PLUM PLUM
11 PLUM PLUM BAR
12 PLUM PLUM PLUM
13 BAR BELL BELL
14 BELL BELL BAR
15 BELL BELL BELL
16 BAR BAR BAR
17 SEVEN SEVEN SEVEN

 

[THE_TRUE_GOD]

18-20 steps is too damn many, a lot of your readers are going to stop reading unless you are doing a great job of keeping the energy moving.

I agree, but without the "damn".

If 2 numbers right is a kiss, 3 is bare breasts, 4 is full frontal viewing, 5 is a nude feel, 6 is the jackpot, then you have lots of possibilities.

For example the first 3 is scary for her, but after several 4's she finds a 2 is nothing and a 3 is only half as embarrassing. Then she gets hotted up by all this sexual exhibitionism and her first 5 is not as scary as it might have been.

If you want to add a blow job as 6 right with 7 right as the jackpot, then that's no more difficult.

 

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[rthnck]

The laws of probability are not immutable

Well the problem here is that we want a 20 step process that will strip miss goody-goody naked and then subject her to various indecencies in escalating sequence. We want a seeming "game of chance" with a decreasing chance of winning to completely fail for some surprising reason leading to the ravaging of miss goody-goody. It's probably correct that slot machines are too random but the solution is very elusive. It would appear that whatever game is used here it will have to be manipulated.

Maybe it can be a nice game of poker (texas hold'em if you want to be topical) with marked cards. The winner of each hand gets the miss goody-goody reward. The pot escalates each hand as do the contestants. The dealer is the manipulator.

 

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[rthnck]

Slow and sensual or long and boring

I'm glad you've got an idea for moving the story along but I'm confused as to why there is a requirement for 20+ steps. I'm all for lots of foreplay but the left shoe/right shoe scenario just seems to have no story value. One shoe is like another. The choice to me would be "shoes". But it's not my story. That's just my two cents. Maybe I'm just not a good enough writer to pull off a tease that is so detailed. Good luck with the story. I look forward to reading the finished product.

 

[THE_TRUE_GOD]

How many blouse buttons does she have? At what point does she lose her hosiery instead? Is a gentle breast massage with clothing done outside the blouse more or less risque than losing the blouse entirely? Do kisses to other non-intimate parts of the body fit in here - neck, belly-button, thighs?

Remember, I'm looking for 20+ steps.

The order in which things are shocking/interesting is very personal.

I have had girlfriends with different ideas about limits.
One I could touch anywhere outside her clothes but nothing inside them, "It's just my clothes you are touching," she said.
Another had a very strict barrier at the waist. Above the waist there were no limits, "That isn't sex, that's just stroking," she said.

 

[FinnMacCool555]

Might I recommend bingo? Here's how it could work:

5 in a row - Remove one article of clothing (woman's choice)

5 in a row diagonally - Remove one article of clothing (winner's choice)

4 corners - Kiss from woman

Two rows of five - French kiss from woman

Cross formation (a vertical and horizontal row filled in that make shape of a cross) - Dry hump

X formation - Handjob from woman

Black Out (all spaces filled in) - Sex with woman (orifice of winner's choice)


It could be arranged that the Bingo would go on until there had been 20 winners. The woman would figure that she'd never have to go farther than kissing the winner, since the odds of just two rows of five is small, and she figures most people will cry out "Bingo!" the first time they get five in a row rather than holding out for the higher levels. However she could get to the higher levels if she underestimates her audience's determination to do really nasty stuff with her. And it would create the progression you're talking about, since the longer the game goes on the more likely it is people get the numbers they need.

P.S. And if I may make a suggestion, I'm thinking this is how the story should end:

The woman has given away 19 prizes, and has had to do every sordid act on the list. Depending on how you plan to do the story, she will either be very excited or very desperate for this Bingo game to be over by then. Some more numbers are called, but no one shouts out Bingo. Then . . . the very last Bingo ball is taken out of the machine. That means that every possible number/letter combination has been read out; everyone in the audience now has a Black Out. That's right: mass gang bang! Whaddaya think?

 

[snooper]

. . . the very last Bingo ball is taken out of the machine. That means that every possible number/letter combination has been read out; everyone in the audience now has a Black Out. That's right: mass gang bang! Whaddaya think?

People just wouldn't cooperate well enough to do that. It is even less believable than the goody-goody agreeing to the game in the first place.

To my mind the problem here is not graded prizes, but the initial concept. How on earth was she persuaded to let "an hour of anything" appear on the list in the first place?

 

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[subwannabe]

I guess my problem with the whole thing would be if she was such goody two shoes why would she agree to doing this in the first place, no matter what the odds were, and if she did agree, why would she go through with it if those long odds did come up, or why would her mate agree to this either? I think I would eliminate the goody two shoes approach and say she was naive and just learning how great sex is and was horny enough to want to experiment more by "taking a chance" with a lottery or slot machine concept. Secretly, she would be hoping to lose. The fundraiser could actually be a church fund raiser to buy gaming equipment for the church. The fund raiser could be run by the men's club so the women of the church wouldn't be upset by the prizes being offered and the whole thing could kind of be done on the sly, without the church's knowledge or the knowledge of goody two shoes men. It could even get to the point that normal prizes were offered so the goody two shoes men wouldn't know that there were actually secret prizes being offered that only a select few knew about.

 

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[Javagirl]

I used to be a "real" fundraiser

Wow, too bad this would be totally illegal as I could have raised a shit load of money to fight diseases.

You could always do a live auction and sell her off to the highest bidder? Auctions make a lot of money ha!

That is way too complicate for an erotica story. I would never, ever think about fundraising and erotica together--not in a million years. HA

 

[snooper]

... The fundraiser could actually be a church fund raiser to buy gaming equipment for the church. ...

Do you mean "gaming equipment" like roulette tables and one arm bandits????

... The fund raiser could be run by the men's club so the women of the church wouldn't be upset by the prizes being offered and the whole thing could kind of be done on the sly, without the church's knowledge or the knowledge of goody two shoes men. It could even get to the point that normal prizes were offered so the goody two shoes men wouldn't know that there were actually secret prizes being offered that only a select few knew about.

The concept of a secret fund raiser sounds absurd to me. Every fund raiser I've been involved in has needed maximum publicity to maximise funds raised.

 

[snooper]

I'm no longer looking for ideas on the mechanics of the event, but rather a list of "prizes" given.

Quite right - the mechanics is easy and there are many possibilities.

The simple list of prizes would be like an auction of talents:

I'll clean your windows. Nude modelling - no touching.
I'll wash your car. A nude blow job.
I'll dig your garden. An evening of straight sex.
I'll wash your clothes. An evening at your disposal, nothing barred but only you.
I'll spring clean your house. A whole night at your disposal, nothing barred but only you.
A holiday at my house. A whole week at your disposal, nothing barred, bring your friends.

Just highlight these prizes to see the translations.

 

[subwannabe]

Snooper,

Yes, the gaming equipment would be gambling equipment of different sorts. I can't remember how I worded my last post and I'm too lazy to reread it but you are right that a "secret" fund raiser would be kind of a contradiction of terms. What I meant was a fundraiser with regular prizes for those unaware and secret prizes for a select few who knew what was going on behind the scenes. Maybe the regular folks would be wondering why a certain few were determined to win, no matter what the cost. In any event, it doesn't look like the writer wants to go down that road anyway.