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Just thought I'd share, because these two little gems brightened my day:

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About the submission: RumoursThis feedback was sent by: Anonymous
Comments: you should have a nail jammed up your dick, you sick perv. you should go to jail and have some inmates force-fuck you. die and rot in hell, you dirty son of a bitch. i hope your little sister cuts your cock off and makes you choke to death on it. P.S. your disclaimer is too light for the story.

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This message contains feedback for: MzDeviancy
About the submission: Rumours: Found OutThis feedback was sent by: Anonymous
Comments: i sent you feedback before and thought you were a guy. let me correct my mistakes. you are a bitch, i hope you like almost scaring people out of sex, cause thats what you did. i hope your brother reads your sick story and decides to act it out on you. i hope he paints your womb with your own blood. i hope he tears your ass and pussy open with his bare hands. you should be screwed to death by a horse. die and rot in hell, you bitchy whore. P.S. your the reason rapists make innocent little girls cry.


Now that's good bad feedback!
 
LOL...I didnt know Lit was being run by a bunch of Conservative half-wits. Too funny!
 
Sounds like the Loving Wives trolls are spreading their wings of hate and disgust.

How about a link to your stories page in your siggy!
 
Just thought I'd share, because these two little gems brightened my day:

This message contains feedback for: MzDeviancy
About the submission: RumoursThis feedback was sent by: Anonymous
Comments: you should have a nail jammed up your dick, you sick perv. you should go to jail and have some inmates force-fuck you. die and rot in hell, you dirty son of a bitch. i hope your little sister cuts your cock off and makes you choke to death on it. P.S. your disclaimer is too light for the story.

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This message contains feedback for: MzDeviancy
About the submission: Rumours: Found OutThis feedback was sent by: Anonymous
Comments: i sent you feedback before and thought you were a guy. let me correct my mistakes. you are a bitch, i hope you like almost scaring people out of sex, cause thats what you did. i hope your brother reads your sick story and decides to act it out on you. i hope he paints your womb with your own blood. i hope he tears your ass and pussy open with his bare hands. you should be screwed to death by a horse. die and rot in hell, you bitchy whore. P.S. your the reason rapists make innocent little girls cry.


Now that's good bad feedback!

My favorite kind of feedback is someone telling me she she got so turned on and wet while reading my story that she had to get out her dildo and bring herself to an orgasm. :D But, I also like to get the kind you got here. :D

Here's one that I got quite a while ago on a father/daughter incest story. It's not as good as yours, but still pretty funny:

Gross
I keep reading this horrible story hoping to find out it was a man and wife role playing (even then it would be gross though). You are a sick pervert and I hope you stay far away from children!
 
Sounds like the Loving Wives trolls are spreading their wings of hate and disgust.

How about a link to your stories page in your siggy!

This is the kind of thing posted on a LW story but, from the actual content, it must have been incest. ;)
 
This is the kind of thing posted on a LW story but, from the actual content, it must have been incest. ;)

I figured that I wasn't saying it was posted in Loving Wives, just that the trolls in the category were likely spreading their horsepucky to other categories.
 
Now that's some feedback any writer on this site would envy. :D

I often wonder what these people expect in terms of story content when they read stories posted here. If they're so pure of mind and heart why are they reading erotica anyway? Go figure it.
 
I need to start catering to these lively readers. My current ones are too well behaved.

Maybe I should give Loving Wives a try...
 
I need to start catering to these lively readers. My current ones are too well behaved.

Maybe I should give Loving Wives a try...

You know, what you could do is write a loving wife story about a loving wife and husband. For some reason, it would go in the same category as the more usual loving wives stories, and piss off a different group of trolls. ;)
 
I need to start catering to these lively readers. My current ones are too well behaved.

Maybe I should give Loving Wives a try...

Mix incest and nonconsent. My adoring public sends me emails like the above all the time ;op
 
You know, what you could do is write a loving wife story about a loving wife and husband. For some reason, it would go in the same category as the more usual loving wives stories, and piss off a different group of trolls. ;)

Done that. I had to delete some of the PCs. :D

Og

Edited for PS: My favourite anonymous PC:

I'm impressed
I'm a married female in her 30's, currently on anti-depressants that made my sex drive go fron 55mph to maybe 5 at best. (With my husband using every trick in the book--so to speak--at once).
That was well written, imaginative, and sexy. Plus, I think someone just FLOORED the gas pedal to the metal. Thanks. I needed that. Writer? Try to publish! You can do it.
 
Done that. I had to delete some of the PCs. :D

Og

Edited for PS: My favourite anonymous PC:

I'm impressed
I'm a married female in her 30's, currently on anti-depressants that made my sex drive go fron 55mph to maybe 5 at best. (With my husband using every trick in the book--so to speak--at once).
That was well written, imaginative, and sexy. Plus, I think someone just FLOORED the gas pedal to the metal. Thanks. I needed that. Writer? Try to publish! You can do it.

Psst....Og, What's the name of the story? I need to read it.
 
yeah, I can see how that would push some buttons.

Where do you post them-- incest, or in non-con?

Nonconsent, with a description and disclaimer indicating that there will be incest. You can't make everyone happy though. People often skip over disclaimers, so they get to the first sex scene and are shocked that there's incest. Others read the disclaimers and think they're not strong enough.

Still, I get less comments from the shocked and appalled than when I posted Rumours in incest with a disclaimer that it was nonconsent. My definition of medium-heavy nonconsent apparently differs from most people's.
 
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