Fuck. Don't you hate it when...

[wishfulthinking]

You rush to write a story and post it and they pick it to pieces finding every inconsistency [and some non inconsistent inconsistencies I'm sure ] that you never knew was there. Fuck

 

[Quiet_Cool]

Rushing'll do that...

Did Lit do the picking? Or was it approved and the readers did so?

Q_C

 

[wishfulthinking]

Readers

I've changed 2 sentences which should clear up most of the problem and resubmitted it. Hopefully they pick it up my comments in the notes field quickly when they search through for nude day contest entries!