FTM story + body parts = confusion

KillerVanity

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Among my stories currently in the works, one involves two female-to-male transsexuals. The story was bounding along smoothly as a gay romance until it came to the sex, which I now worry will confuse the readers. It's not really touched in, as both characters are aware of the other's body parts, but I don't want people to be lost in a sea of "After Boy1 licked Boy2's clit for a few minutes, Boy2 jumped on top of Boy1 and put his cock into Boy2's cunt."

I considered making it an anal story and excluding any extraneous parts, but that sort of kills the idea altogether. Does anyone have any ideas?
 
Using names is useful... or having one character as the 'girly' one, being described as her or vice versa with one as the 'manly' one.... but having the story in front would help... if one has a cock its more likely the man;ly one... if one has a clit its more likely the girly one...


any help?
 
Starblayde said:
Using names is useful... or having one character as the 'girly' one, being described as her or vice versa with one as the 'manly' one.... but having the story in front would help... if one has a cock its more likely the man;ly one... if one has a clit its more likely the girly one...


any help?

Well, not really, but I appreciate the effort. The whole point is that the genitals are both interchangably, otherwise it's just an average gay or straight story :( bah! Maybe I'll just have to abandon it.
 
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