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megawriter27

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I live in Moscow, Russia and it's very hard to get needed destination by car, because the city looks like an enormous traffic jam. So much people prefer the subway's train to buses or cars. So one day I rode on the tube and it was Soldier's day (it's hard to put it in english))))))))), the day when every SpecNaz's soldier (some kinda SWAT) celebrate it outside at parks, alleys and etc. and of course, they are very drunk.
So when I rode on the tube one of the soldiers came up to a girl standing and holding by the upper rail. When he put his hand around her waist, the girl started murmuring smth. No one doesn't wanna have a deal with sailors, soldiers and so on: they can just kick your ass and go away. Her pleads fell on his deaf ear and then a woman who sat in front of them told him to get away from her daughter, but he refused and explain that he liked her daughter not her, old shoe! Unfortunately, it was time for me to get off.
If smbd can make up a story from my real life situation, I'd be glad, because many stories I have read are so commonplace and similiar like you read the same one with different writing((((((
No offence, guys)))))))
I don't know but several stories of mine were banned for violence, although I didn't wsee it.
 
I live in Moscow, Russia and it's very hard to get needed destination by car, because the city looks like an enormous traffic jam. So much people prefer the subway's train to buses or cars. So one day I rode on the tube and it was Soldier's day (it's hard to put it in english))))))))), the day when every SpecNaz's soldier (some kinda SWAT) celebrate it outside at parks, alleys and etc. and of course, they are very drunk.
So when I rode on the tube one of the soldiers came up to a girl standing and holding by the upper rail. When he put his hand around her waist, the girl started murmuring smth. No one doesn't wanna have a deal with sailors, soldiers and so on: they can just kick your ass and go away. Her pleads fell on his deaf ear and then a woman who sat in front of them told him to get away from her daughter, but he refused and explain that he liked her daughter not her, old shoe! Unfortunately, it was time for me to get off.
If smbd can make up a story from my real life situation, I'd be glad, because many stories I have read are so commonplace and similiar like you read the same one with different writing((((((
No offence, guys)))))))
I don't know but several stories of mine were banned for violence, although I didn't wsee it.

Well, the hero can simple out wit the soldier and win the young woman and mother's admiration. As thanks, the mother gives the hero the best sex of his life instead of the young woman.
 
I live in Moscow, Russia and it's very hard to get needed destination by car, because the city looks like an enormous traffic jam. So much people prefer the subway's train to buses or cars. So one day I rode on the tube and it was Soldier's day (it's hard to put it in english))))))))), the day when every SpecNaz's soldier (some kinda SWAT) celebrate it outside at parks, alleys and etc. and of course, they are very drunk.
So when I rode on the tube one of the soldiers came up to a girl standing and holding by the upper rail. When he put his hand around her waist, the girl started murmuring smth. No one doesn't wanna have a deal with sailors, soldiers and so on: they can just kick your ass and go away. Her pleads fell on his deaf ear and then a woman who sat in front of them told him to get away from her daughter, but he refused and explain that he liked her daughter not her, old shoe! Unfortunately, it was time for me to get off.
If smbd can make up a story from my real life situation, I'd be glad, because many stories I have read are so commonplace and similiar like you read the same one with different writing((((((
No offence, guys)))))))
I don't know but several stories of mine were banned for violence, although I didn't wsee it.


My only concern is that the daughter be over 18. lots of drama and conflit with this story and lots of places to take it. on the net you see avi's from japan where a woman is touched and .... while riding the tube. where would you want this story to go? for me, i can see the mother being a milf (40ish) and the daughter is 19 about to be married.....
 
Well, the hero can simple out wit the soldier and win the young woman and mother's admiration. As thanks, the mother gives the hero the best sex of his life instead of the young woman.

I kinda like Snake's take. The mom begs the hero to help her daughter and he is shamed into telling the soldier to stop. The soldier is so drunk, that the hero is easily able to beat him up. Mom is grateful and invites the hero to dinner. At dinner, mom and daughter vie for the hero's attention. Eventually, all three end up in bed.

Jenny
 
I kinda like Snake's take. The mom begs the hero to help her daughter and he is shamed into telling the soldier to stop. The soldier is so drunk, that the hero is easily able to beat him up. Mom is grateful and invites the hero to dinner. At dinner, mom and daughter vie for the hero's attention. Eventually, all three end up in bed.

Jenny

The daughter is the offering, but the mom goes to get her some too sorta helping the daughter please the hero....can work either way, but perserving the virgin helps make him more of a hero. Along those lines, the daughter could peek and masturbate as the hero and mother goes at it. Thinking from the daughter's point of view.
 
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