From her view

[MrKinkMaster]

This was so hard to do. I've written many stories, but at the request of a few friends I was asked to try to write one from the girl's point of view. This was my first attempt at this. I welcome any and all comments. The title is Walked By Her Master.


http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=44018

 

[MrKinkMaster]

Everyone is either very nice, or my story has put all to sleep.

 

[Impetus]

Not my cup of genre, but an awesome story nonetheless. Great writing and a neat story with just enough twists and turns to give it real life. Very impressive. I can't comment on how much it particularly turned me on because such things are not exactly my literary forte, but I really liked the writing style, which is no easy thing to get down. I noticed a few technical errors as I read, be careful of those, they mar an otherwise excelent story. Nice job.

-I

 

[MrKinkMaster]

Thanks

 

[MrKinkMaster]

thanks again

Thank you for all the supportive emails and messages. I'll be writing again soon.

 

[silky1]

Walked By My Master

As you can see on the left there, I am not a real heavy message board poster but I had a need to come here to say the following:

Your Story...
BY FAR, THE BEST PIECE OF LITERATURE I HAVE SEEN TO Date, in the area of BDSM. It was totally totally captivating. Heavy in places, yes very much so but captivating nonetheless . When I got to the bottom of page one and saw that there was a part 2, I said to myself, "Oh Goody Thank God". And when I caught my breath after reading it and then clicked the link to see if you had written anything else in Literotica/ or if you had this grand old Website someplace, I then pouted big time because you have neither.
This was just a tremendous effort, full of talent. The thing that I find most amazing is that this story was actually written by a male. (Assuming you did not choose a pen name of different gender) Your ability to articulate the feelings and emotions of this female character and get it "right on the head" wow!

Your descriptions of the other characters were so well done that I feel like I know them.

"Most authors" would have put the Huge Cock on the Character that used her the hardest (Jon) in order to make the story Heavier.
But YOU. You are not “most authors” and so instead you brilliantly sacrificed that in order to leave a clear and lasting impression on any reader’s mind that had Jon been the one with the biggest cock she had ever seen, that she would have been unable to cope with it, despite her strength. Brilliant stroke. Absolutely brilliant.

This story was a fine example of a “Masterpiece,” (*for those whose interest is in BDSM Genre*) that was so thought provoking that I almost feel as if you have just topped me.

I would like to sincerely thank you for your efforts. I am sure you are a busy person and it is not necessary that you respond to this letter, but I sincerely hope that there is something else out there, whether on a site, or your hard drive or whatever that has been written by you and you are willing to share it with me, or link me to it. For I am sure it would be a fine read indeed.

Thanks for the pleasure,

silky

 

[Guest]

Re:MrKinkmaster

Wow.<speachless>

 

[NoJo]

Kink,
Really great story! I was there (watching)!
I think writing like this, from "their" point of view has probably made you better at understanding what "they" want.

(Of course there are other ways, e.g. to actually switch.)

I'd be really interested to read some feedback on this from a practicing femsub!

 

[silky1]

feed back from practicing femsub

Hi there,

If you look up about 3 messages ahead, I think, you will see what I wrote about that story.

I "am" a practicing femsub. Well actually a Female slave.

I have also probably read in the last 3 years, over a thousand stories related to BDSM so when I gave him the complimate above, about it being the best I had read to date, I was really giving Him a compliment.

I sent him an e-mail as well in relation to this story and asking if he had any more work that I could see but I have not heard a word, nor has he responded to this thread lately.

Seems he has dropped off and away... Darn. A huge talent there.

Take care,

silky