Friends with Benefits

sirhugs

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He and she have been neighbours a long time. Though normally couples share interests along gender lines, in this case, not so much.

he works out of the home, a writer perthaps, so he was always the house husband - taking care of the kids, cooking, while his wife had a career in finance.

she was a conventional stay at home mom, very conservative, hubby ran a construction business, but liked the stock market.

so when the couples got together, her hubby tended to talk stocks with his wife, while he & she talked kids, baking, school gossip... but are just good friends. neither would think of cheating.

After many years, the kids are grown. Her hubby dies from a heart attack while screwing a hooker in Vegas. A few months later, his wife announces that with all the kids moved out, she no longer needs hubby, is relocating to New york for a new job without him.

Of course, the and she console each other , as friends do.

About six months later, while having coffee , she looks at him and says "don't meb need sex?"

He says "sure we do?"

She : "well, what are you doing about it?"

him: "Not much" He blushes" well...you know...self help."

She: "Don't you get tired of that? i know i do."

would someone like to take this and run with it?
 
Certainly has potential, but the setup sounds long and boooooring. You might want to start it in medias res, and later fill in the backstory.
 
Certainly has potential, but the setup sounds long and boooooring. You might want to start it in medias res, and later fill in the backstory.

that's how I write most of my wicked little drooleries...
 
I love friends with benefits. I hope someone gets interested and writes it!
 
Sounds good. But why a hooker? Can't it be a swinging-incident-gone-awry?
 
You could have one of the protagonists be a Human Resources professional at a large local company. Hence the discussion of "benefits" would lead naturally to other sorts of benefits....... Just a thought!
 
You could have one of the protagonists be a Human Resources professional at a large local company. Hence the discussion of "benefits" would lead naturally to other sorts of benefits....... Just a thought!

nice twisted...but then you ARE nicely twisted;)
 
She could ask about his sex drive and activities then offer to fix him up with a lady friend of hers. She does this knowing her lady friend will tell her all about it and she will seduce him, not minding sharing him with her friend.
 
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