Friendly idea

[u4dandy]

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[NASCARaddicted]

personally, I dislike this idea.

I mean, she just got a b/f, and the first thing that comes to her mind is "having sex with another guy" ? Some may see it different, but for me, this would be cheating.

First of all: I guess, having sex with this guy just once wouldn't be enough to become "good". It would take much more time and sex .... just think about it: She tells her b/f that she wants to wait some more (but at the meantime, she is fucking around with the other guy)
And then: I know, I am old fashioned, but still, I think, if you sacrifice your virginity, it should be with someone special - with someone that you really love.

If I would have to decide between a virgin girl and an experienced girl, I would take the virgin.

 

[u4dandy]

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[Mr_Saint]

That might work better

 

[silversword]

I agree with NASCARaddict on this one. It comes across very unrealistic. There was a thread about on Lit not so long ago dealing with the issue of virgins in stories and how they are all portrayed as cock hungry nymphomaniacs. (a very twisted porno view on the subject)

this story idea has potential to really explore the girls fantasies about sex. You could have dialouge with the girls friend exploring her innermost thoughts on loosing her virginity interspersed with this guys views on sex and what its like.

It has the potential to make quite an interesting peice of erotica, might keep this idea in mind for future use!

silver

 

[sirhugs]

there are numerous versions of this on Lit , other sites, and in story mags, so unrealitic or not, I think it can work. Like any unreal story though, it must be extremely well written, with the virgin's motivation worked out plausibly. Maybe hubby to be is a stud, and thinks she has slept around a lot. They agreed to 'save it for marriage' fso there first night would be special. Now, she's panicking about her inexperience....

 

[chicagophotoman]

What if this girl starts going out with this new and first bf, they decide to get intimate, she goes down on him, doesnt do it right, the guy dumps her, because he's a teenaged idiot with no patience, she runs crying to her pal, and he shows her how to give great head, they end up living happily ever after.

 

[u4dandy]

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[NASCARaddicted]

now thats a great idea, i love it :-D

yep, gotta agree to that.

Just think: Her b/f asks her to do a blowjob. She never did that before, so of course, she is insecure and unexperienced. During the blowjob, she makes some mistakes. For example, she accidently bites him a little bit, or maybe she is not gentle enough.

Anyway, the guy get's really mad. He says stuff like "you are stupid", "you body is ugly" (needless to say that she is really smart and really beautiful) ....

Also, maybe he tells her: "If you are too stupid to do a blowjob, then drop your pants and let me fuck your pussy".
The girl is shocked. She is a virgin, and right now, she ain't ready for her first time.

Maybe this happened in the car, in a remote area. He is really pissed off, so he tells her, to leave the car ... then he drives away

Until that moment, the girl was kinda naive, when it came to this guy. She thought it was the big love - but now, she realized that he only wanted sex.

Later, she is at the home of a (male) buddy. She tells him how bad he treated her, and that she realized that he was just an idiot. And she tells her buddy, that he called her "ugly and stupid" Of course, the buddy tells her, that she ain't ugly or stupid ... the total opposite is true.
The girl starts to realize that her buddy was just more then a buddy ... he would be a good b/f, too.
After some time, she falls in love with him - and he treats her totally different. He treats her with respect. Now she is ready for her first time ... (but of course, this doesn't happen within a day. This could take several weeks or even more).

Also, what about this addition: When the girl was together with this first b/f (the idiot one), she was insecure. She was dressed normal/maybe even like a wallflower. Now, she is together with this other guy ... and she is becoming more and more secure. Now she wears stuff like miniskirts, tight t-shirts - all that stuff.

The first b/f is surprised by the new look, and now he wants her back - or at least, he wants sex with her. But now, the girl can tell him to "fuck off" ....