Form - fucking for!

[CharleyH]

Fine - all this talk of sestinas and sonnets ... I wrote a villanelle - form for ONCE!

check it out now - mo-tho ....fuckers!

It is not bad, if I say so: it took a while, but, I did well.

http://english.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=209511

 

[bluerains]

as I told

ya...it rocks...am really picky ...with perceptions of what I like and I loved ...this ......an E would not do it justice....flames and rockets it is...

 

[eagleyez]

Fine - all this talk of sestinas and sonnets ... I wrote a villanelle - form for ONCE!

check it out now - mo-tho ....fuckers!

It is not bad, if I say so: it took a while, but, I did well.

http://english.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=209511

nice

I know a Villanelle girl in glasses.

All kind of visionary to go around.

 

[champagne1982]

Fine - all this talk of sestinas and sonnets ... I wrote a villanelle - form for ONCE!

check it out now - mo-tho ....fuckers!

It is not bad, if I say so: it took a while, but, I did well.

http://english.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=209511

Yeah, you did and it's not bad at all. You even managed to fit in a couple of those smutty anatomy words that haunt the vocabulary of every poet and writer of erotica. Congrats.

Does this mean you'll not be trying form again? I'd like to see what you could do with a more restrictive type. Triolets are restricting in that you need to say as much as possible in the two lines that are repeated, sorta the layers of your cake and then end rhyme your icing in the remaining verses.

I just know you can do that, I did -- Homer's Doubt

 

[Guest]

Wow Carrie! It pays to leave a link or two around. I missed that poem 1st time around, thanks.

Yours is purdy good too Ms CH.

 

[CharleyH]

Yeah, you did and it's not bad at all. You even managed to fit in a couple of those smutty anatomy words that haunt the vocabulary of every poet and writer of erotica. Congrats.

Does this mean you'll not be trying form again? I'd like to see what you could do with a more restrictive type. Triolets are restricting in that you need to say as much as possible in the two lines that are repeated, sorta the layers of your cake and then end rhyme your icing in the remaining verses.

I just know you can do that, I did -- Homer's Doubt

I hound Angeline in Sestinas!!! I wrote this only for her and Fool. I can!!!!


A challenge in the gunsmoke perhaps?

Thanks love - and joking - or not (raised eyebrow!)

 

[CharleyH]

Wow Carrie! It pays to leave a link or two around. I missed that poem 1st time around, thanks.

Yours is purdy good too Ms CH.

I write.

 

[Remec]

I just know you can do that, I did -- Homer's Doubt

<nodding>
Yeah, even I managed that one (Remembering, A Chance Missed, Promises) a few times--so far. They're tough, but I like trying to find the right way to say the thought(s) that crop up in my mind.

But, I guess you could say that about any type of form poetry, couldn't you? The challenge of conveying things in a way that works is compounded by the strictures inherent in dealing with whatever form you're writing in.

 

[The_Fool]

I hound Angeline in Sestinas!!! I wrote this only for her and Fool. I can!!!!


A challenge in the gunsmoke perhaps?

Thanks love - and joking - or not (raised eyebrow!)

Don't write for me, baby, write for you....

Quite tasty...