Forcing Her To Cuck

[digittwitch]

So, I'm trying, trying, trying to get back into writing regularly but finding myself blocked on a regular basis. Might as well throw out some ideas, if I can't be inspired to do something with them,maybe someone else can.....I'm a giver.

A prim and proper wife, a good Catholic girl in a good Catholic marriage straight out of college- they both attended school near home, so neither one of them has been away from home much. But they had to transfer out of state for work and, her husband being a guy, he's finally found the joys of porn.
He finds himself fascinated by the idea of being cuckolded, a concept he knows he can never approach with his buckled down wife. He also knows, however, that he is kind of pathetic sexually, small cock, quick cummer, and he honestly believes they would both be happier if she was with other men.
All of this mixes up in his head- the male-dominated aspects of their religion, wanting to make his wife happy, and the new world of alternative sex he's discovered- and spills out when one of his coworkers get him drunk.
The coworker offers to assist. He'll "break in" and rape the wife, teach her how good sex can be. The husband finds himself agreeing to it....although the coworker, who will later tell the husband it was to make sure the husbands surprise seem genuine, throws in a twist.....instead of one man breaking in, he brings a half dozen friends.
The wife is gang raped while the husband, secretly overjoyed, watches, and then......



my block takes over.

 

[psyburn21]

Do you know exactly how the wife feels about the events after the fact? I would suggest you start there. Considering that the wife is a devote Catholic, be careful handling the aftermath as it could come off as being unrealistic.

 

[darkbeast]

I agree with psyburn, this story's pivot point is in the aftermath. Why won't she consider this a great offense, call the police, etc.? What happens to make her enjoy this? Or does she?

 

[favoritesgoddess]

I can't see how this would be anything but disturbing unless you work on the wife's mind first. If his fantasy is to see her happily submit to a 6 man gang bang, a half-dozen guys just breaking in the front door isn't going to do it in any believable way that I can think of.

On the other hand, if you can make it clear that this is a secret fantasy of hers, it might work. If she's just hiding behind a prim and proper facade and he brings it crashing down and turns into a sexual wildcat, maybe. Another angle would be to have him work on breaking down her barriers, maybe even perverting her religious beliefs to work against her. Make her want to submit to his fantasies.

But a straight-up gang rape for his enjoyment isn't cuckolding as I understand it but violence against his wife, pure and simple. I think it would be a good, albeit disturbing, story if you were to take it from the POV of the man as the whole plan unfolds in his twisted mind, fueled by porn fantasies and mixed-up ideas of his role as a man and a lack of any understanding of her needs. It could work as a very dark story about his sexual undoing.

But as a "she was gang raped and LOVED IT" story...for me, personally, it's too offensive. Though I'm sure there's a niche out there for it.

 

[EddieEgypt]

So, I'm trying, trying, trying to get back into writing regularly but finding myself blocked on a regular basis. Might as well throw out some ideas, if I can't be inspired to do something with them,maybe someone else can.....I'm a giver.

A prim and proper wife, a good Catholic girl in a good Catholic marriage straight out of college- they both attended school near home, so neither one of them has been away from home much. But they had to transfer out of state for work and, her husband being a guy, he's finally found the joys of porn.
He finds himself fascinated by the idea of being cuckolded, a concept he knows he can never approach with his buckled down wife. He also knows, however, that he is kind of pathetic sexually, small cock, quick cummer, and he honestly believes they would both be happier if she was with other men.
All of this mixes up in his head- the male-dominated aspects of their religion, wanting to make his wife happy, and the new world of alternative sex he's discovered- and spills out when one of his coworkers get him drunk.
The coworker offers to assist. He'll "break in" and rape the wife, teach her how good sex can be. The husband finds himself agreeing to it....although the coworker, who will later tell the husband it was to make sure the husbands surprise seem genuine, throws in a twist.....instead of one man breaking in, he brings a half dozen friends.
The wife is gang raped while the husband, secretly overjoyed, watches, and then......



my block takes over.

And then...they all go to jail?

Kidding (though that is the most realistic result).

You're a sick fuck, I like it.

I'd never do this to my wife in a million years, but hey, that's what fantasy is for.

I don't think it has to be a secret fantasy of hers. As I understood your idea, the point was for the rape itself to be the catalyst to her sexual awakening. Prior to that, she thought of nothing but mish with the lights out, and only for the purpose of conception - she's a devoted Catholic, right?

But there does have to be some element of her personality that makes her view it as something more than just an act of brutality and a violation of her honor. She can like it, as in the physical sensation, if they're not beating the crap out of her in the process, but how does a woman like that wrap her head around the idea of liking it...and then admitting it to herself...and then to him...?

Your husband character is a douche and people will hate him, so you have to make this backfire on him bigtime, or people will hate it. The wife's newly discovered sexuality therefor has to be used as a weapon against him.

 

[Giannii31]

i like this.... i could add more to it and see where it takes us

 

[Newstart]

You could have the wife recognise one of her rapers as a colleague of her husband - this would give her some leverage against him.

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

... I don't think it has to be a secret fantasy of hers. As I understood your idea, the point was for the rape itself to be the catalyst to her sexual awakening. Prior to that, she thought of nothing but mish with the lights out, and only for the purpose of conception - she's a devoted Catholic, right? ...

Good Catholic girls don't have fantasies like that, or at least it is difficult to make it believable.

... you have to make this backfire on the husband bigtime, or people will hate it. The wife's newly discovered sexuality therefor has to be used as a weapon against him.

I imagine she goes off in to the sunset hand in hand with the biggest and ugliest of the rapists leaving the husband inconsolable. (The "biggest and the ugliest" do not have to be the same person.)