Forced Wife

[storylover2005]

Husband comes home from a hard day at work and wife starts in on him nagging about what she wants him to do. He can;'t take anymore and grabs her by the hair telling her he is going to show her who is the boss. This story should have a bondage, forced sex, or domination theme.

 

[Rebel Rose]

sounds like a good story line to me...

wish I had the time to do it

 

[sirhugs]

a good generic idea, but where would you go with it?

 

[BedtimeStories77]

Enquiring minds would like to know!

There seems to be a lot you're leaving out! I can understand wanting to "leave the details to the writer" and all, but it seems we'd need a little something more to go on!

If not other "detail" towards the lives of the characters, we could benefit from knowing more of your own interests. Pardon me for not knowing, but... Are you male or female? Do you see your self as (or wish for) a more submissive or Dominant role? Is there anything within BDSM or fetishes that you love (dream of) or absolutely hate?

 

[sirhugs]

when I just saw the thread title, I assumed it would be forced into prostitution or gangbangs etc. Although those themes aren't big for me, they seem to have a fiollowing.

 

[~Sweets~]

You could add a twist that his rough treatment of her is more then welcomed by his wife. Was she learning someplace else? Is the idea new? What is his reaction to her enjoying the treatment? It has potential in a few areas but needs more character development.

 

[storylover2005]

forced wife

What starts out as his attempt to punish her is welcomed by her. The more he tries to make her submissive the hotter she becomes until his desire to punish her is consumed by her desire to be punished or at least to be dominated.

Grabbing her hair surprises her but she accepts it without resistance. Soon he has forced her face into his crotch and she tears at his clothing to satisfy him, but that is not enough.

 

[JRaven]

when I just saw the thread title, I assumed it would be forced into prostitution or gangbangs etc. Although those themes aren't big for me, they seem to have a fiollowing.

When I saw the title, I thought she was forced to marry and become a wife. I expected a nonconsent type story.

Jenny

 

[BedtimeStories77]

What starts out as his attempt to punish her is welcomed by her. The more he tries to make her submissive the hotter she becomes until his desire to punish her is consumed by her desire to be punished or at least to be dominated.

Grabbing her hair surprises her but she accepts it without resistance. Soon he has forced her face into his crotch and she tears at his clothing to satisfy him, but that is not enough.

So, you see the wife as a "natural sub"? Someone who may not have known such a lifestyle even exsisted, let alone any terminology for it, etc., and during this little outburst with hubby she realizes she craves the "punishments"?

Should the husband have a knowledge and/or interest in BDSM or should the outburst somewhat surprise him as well?


(See? It pays to stop and think a lil' more! )

 

[storylover2005]

RE:Forced wife

The husband does not have any real knowledge, but soon realizes that he has a natural desire to satisfy her need for submission, along with his desire to dominate. The grabbing of her hair and forcing her to her knees instantly arouses him.

 

[BedtimeStories77]

And now you have more for authors to work with!

 

[Rebel Rose]

a good generic idea, but where would you go with it?

And now you have more for authors to work with!

I dunno guys... this was something I coulda run with, if I had the time. Sometimes less is more.

 

[storylover2005]

Froced wife

Now I just need to find someone willling to write the story.

 

[Rebel Rose]

Now I just need to find someone willling to write the story.

Sharing a computer and putting up with my friend's 13 month old baby aren't very conducive to writing right now. Maybe in a couple of weeks I will have my own computer and might give it a go then.

 

[BedtimeStories77]

Now I just need to find someone willling to write the story.

I'm interested, but I didn't want to get your hopes up. With the projects I have in the works I don't know when I'd be able to even start this one. Sorry.