For those who value story...

[Cruel2BKind]

A few weeks ago I submitted a piece with very little sex in it that didn't get a lot of views because it was published on a sunday, with a glitch that wouldn't let anyone vote.

It is gay male, but the sex is very brief and not well described so please don't let that turn you away. The feedback I've gotten says that the story is good, and I just want a second opinion.

Pretty please?

http://www.literotica.com/s/file-66

It is about a political prisoner, and told through his journal.

 

[MolagBal]

Spoilers:
I decided to give it a chance, even though you promised tragedy in the beginning (not in the mood for that). In the end, I really enjoyed it, and not just because you let the lovers reunite. I think that maybe you should have put more into your characters though. Their love was believable, but I didn't really get a feel for either of them as real people with actual personalities. Taylor is a loveable hunk who fights evil with knowledge and Tam is just a guy who loves some other guy. Even though Tam was a soulless slave for most his life, there must be more to squeeze out of him, so Taylor surely could have had more substance. But then again, making it longer probably wouldn't have been a good idea. I wouldn't have invested the time in a long story where the main character was implied to be doomed.

I favorited it. I'll be sure to check out your other stories soon, thanks for the read!