Foot Teased into Submission

[footslut2u]

Let me know what you think about my story.

Here is a direct link to it:



http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=504862

 

[kuellar]

To be honest, it seems more like the introduction to a story than a story in itself. Nothing actually happens, other than the narrator giving us a brief overview of his life. There really isn't much more I can think of to say... do you have any plans to continue this?

 

[footslut2u]

Anyone else have any comments?

 

[PacoFear]

Foot,

Afraid I agree with kuellar. What you have there is a decently written little essay. There's no story. It reads to me very much like a diary entry. What was it that you were going for?

-PF

 

[footslut2u]

I could probably tell each incident in a story...this is just an overall general narrative of my experience. But that is alot of work, and why do it unless people want to read it.

Not getting much feedback, so unless I do I would not bother. Anyone interested?

 

[sr71plt]

I could probably tell each incident in a story...this is just an overall general narrative of my experience. But that is alot of work, and why do it unless people want to read it.

Not getting much feedback, so unless I do I would not bother. Anyone interested?

You've got the cart before the horse. You write it first; then people comment on it (if they feel motivated to. No one owes you a comment). If you consider writing a lot of work you don't want to do for its won reward, why even bother?