Follow up/direction to continue story.

[Beneaththesurface]

My first story, “A Girl Named Desire”, has received good feedback so far and I am looking to do follow up stories.

The story begins with when strangers meet at a bar where he is invited to join a table of females. Drinks flow and conversation turns risqué as a game of “truth or dare” begins. After accepting a dare for a quickie in the bathroom she decides to go home with him. He surprises her with some erotic light bondage. No names haves been exchanged as he awakes to her being gone with only a note.”

I am looking for ideas on a direction to take it since I never really defined the characters. The male could be a pure dominant, the female cold turn the tables, this one night stand could be become a relationship either loving or bdsm? What are your thoughts and ideas?

https://literotica.com/beta/s/a-girl-named-desire

 

[Carnevil9]

A synopsis would help.

 

[Beneaththesurface]

Thank you. I’ve included a brief synopsis.

 

[Carnevil9]

I would have the next chapter involve the girl turning the tables on him. She knows where he lives, but he knows nothing about her. So she has to make the next move. She leaves a note on his door telling him to be at a certain place at a certain time, and includes just enough so that he knows it's from the girl he brought home the other day.

(actually, you said he woke up with a note. Maybe this invitation is in the note that he woke up with)

When he gets there (her apartment, or maybe a cheap motel room, or an abandoned store someplace) she restrains him somehow (handcuffs, ropes, or maybe just a locked door) and starts to gently dominate him, to see if he can play sub as well as dom. To his surprise, he responds well to it and they have a great time. After a lot of sex, he falls asleep, and awakes to find himself alone again and unrestrained, with another note inviting him to their next adventure.

(maybe the next adventure includes some of the other females from the first time they met)

 

[Beneaththesurface]

Thanks for the suggestions. Using the note is a wonderful idea to tie them together. That gives me food for thought to lead into a follow up along with some twists for the future. In case you haven’t read here is the last paragraph. Your idea would fit great.

When I awake the only trace of her I find is a note on the nightstand with her phone number and the text, "My Best! Love, Desire."

https://www.literotica.com/beta/s/a-girl-named-desire