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Boxlicker101

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I probably get more than my share of one-bombs from trolls but my recently posted story also collected this marvelous email. Occasionally, somebody will criticize me because I am not competing for the Nobel Prize in Literature but I don't very often get emails like this one:

This message contains feedback for: Boxlicker101
About the submission: Annie's Neglected Pussy
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

Your a fucking ass hoke.Any wife that cheats on her husband,or the husband
cheating on the wife are pieces of shit.Your wife in this story is a slut/whore
and will sooner or later will get her come upance.

The story was posted to "Loving Wives" of course and the feedback doesn't bother me at all. actually, I rather like getting illiterate responses like this one and consider them to be high praise.

The same story also evoked this email:

This message contains feedback for: Boxlicker101
This feedback was sent by:

Comments:

I have not read all your stories in Literotica but Annie's Neglected Pussy
turned me on until I am beside myself I am a MWF, married in name only since
he is no longer interested. I am 46, hungry for sex, and your story gave me a
wonderful, delicious climax more than once while reading it. I wish you could
continue this story about this couple since her husband is a LOUSE like mine.
Please write to me and tell me you will write more of this story. Continue
it PLEASE. You seem to be such a wonderful, caring man. I wish you lived
closer to me.

Because it was sent to me as an email, rather than being left as a PC, I have deleted the email address. I did answer her, though, and I am trying to think of how to write a sequel. :) The second email describes EXACTLY what I am trying to do and I consider it to outweigh by far thousands of negative crap like the first one.

That is my $1.37, after adjusting for inflation, worth.
 
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Boxlicker101 said:
I probably get more than my share of one-bombs from trolls but my recently posted story also collected this marvelous email. Occasionally, somebody will criticize me because I am not competing for the Nobel Prize in Literature but I don't very often get emails like this one:

Hey Boxlicker101...sounds like the same frustrated guy who one-bombs me every so often for my story "One Rainy Day!"

What makes it so weird is, he keeps doing it, every so often...I think he actually goes back occasionally and re-reads it, just to fire himself up!

Obviously someone whose wife left him, because his dick wasn't big enough, or because...hey, guess what?! He's a jerk!!

The other email sounds far more interesting...didja keep her address? LOL

Keep writing, for the second person...and the rest of us.

Woody
 
Isn't it weird, I wrote The Reserve, and its not ever said that this couple is married. I still get attacks form this guy about how wives like that are shit and on and on. I thinkit's hilarious that he just sends out this feedback for every single story. does he read them to upset himself or just to rid his conscience of getting off to the idea of a woman cheating???
 
gotwood49 said:
Hey Boxlicker101...sounds like the same frustrated guy who one-bombs me every so often for my story "One Rainy Day!"

What makes it so weird is, he keeps doing it, every so often...I think he actually goes back occasionally and re-reads it, just to fire himself up!

Obviously someone whose wife left him, because his dick wasn't big enough, or because...hey, guess what?! He's a jerk!!

The other email sounds far more interesting...didja keep her address? LOL

Keep writing, for the second person...and the rest of us.

Woody

Thanks, Woody. I intend to keep writing smut and sometimes trying something more literate. One way or another, I don't intend to compete for the Nobel Prize or anything else, except sometimes something on Lit.

I don't think people can one-bomb you more than once for the same story. The second one won't register unless they use a different computer.

I did keep the woman's email address and wrote back to her. I hope to foment a regular communication and write a story about her. The one about Annie was about a real person but I made changes to protect her anonymity. And, it was strictly fiction.
 
Boxlicker101 said:
Maybe it's Brinnie.

Nah, 'she's' too busy doing eveything but actually reading any of the stories on here.
I just found out there's a lot of people on the GB and Playground that don't know this is a story site.
 
Interesting

You know, I'd become convinced that the Loving Wives category is the most misunderstood category on Literotica. I figured that people were expecting something that the usual conventions and thus reacted negatively.

Now I'm wondering if it's just a couple people who hate every story in that category due to personal shortcomings and have a little too much time on their hands.

Thanks for the interesting post
 
Dar~ said:
Isn't it weird, I wrote The Reserve, and its not ever said that this couple is married. I still get attacks form this guy about how wives like that are shit and on and on. I thinkit's hilarious that he just sends out this feedback for every single story. does he read them to upset himself or just to rid his conscience of getting off to the idea of a woman cheating???


Baffling. I read it and it never occurred to me to imagine that the couple might be married. I assumed BF/GF and that when he left, it was permanent.

Shanglan
 
BlackShanglan said:
Baffling. I read it and it never occurred to me to imagine that the couple might be married. I assumed BF/GF and that when he left, it was permanent.

Shanglan
Yeah he said . . "she had time to be whore, but not time for Jonathan. He deserves a better wife. If she hadn't been such a slut, he may have stayed married to her."

I was like WTF, as It never occurred to me that they were married adn I wrote it.*shrug*
made me laugh though
 
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