First timers looking for an editor

[JackAndElle]

Hi everyone!

We're Elle and Jack, and we're looking for an editor for our first story. We've been reading and lurking on literotica since forever, but this is our first time as authors (so please be firm, but gentle!). We'd welcome both copy-editing and plot/character advice.

The story is about about a phone call between two friends (Elle and Lisa) that evolves into an exploration of their deepest fantasies about sex, sharing boyfriends, anal (especially rimming, M-on-F) with lesbian/bi play being a constant undertone. What begins with an innocent phone call, turns into a steamy phone-sex session between the two, that will change how they look at each other forever.

It's some 6500 words long, self-contained, but we wrote it to become the first part of a series. It's loosely based on a real-life experience I (Elle) had with of my close friends.

Here are the details:
Title: The Phone Call
Description: Friends discover anal fantasies about their boyfriends and themselves.
Keywords: girlfriends, lesbian phone sex, blowjob, anal fantasy, rimming, sharing boyfriends
Length: ~6500 words

Please let us know!
Elle and Jack

 

[JackAndElle]

Also, is it acceptable to simply post the story here as an attachment so you could see for yourself if it's something you'd like to edit? We'd be happy to do that.

 

[PacoFear]

Also, is it acceptable to simply post the story here as an attachment so you could see for yourself if it's something you'd like to edit? We'd be happy to do that.

No need, I think, to post the entire story. You've done an admirable job describing it and laying out the kind of help you're looking for. Now just comes the pesky patience part waiting for an editor to pick you up.

 

[JackAndElle]

Hi PacoFear, thanks. We'll be waiting patiently!

Please PM us or post here if anyone is interested!

 

[Jennifer_Juniper]

Hi! I'd like to give it a try. My strong suit is grammar, though I can also give plot and pacing suggestions. Though I'm brand new to this site, I have been editing (and writing) for a few years now.

 

[JackAndElle]

Hi! I'd like to give it a try. My strong suit is grammar, though I can also give plot and pacing suggestions. Though I'm brand new to this site, I have been editing (and writing) for a few years now.

Thanks Jennifer!

I tried PM-ing you, but your PMs are blocked. I think you need to click something in your User CP to let others PM you.

- Elle

 

[_Lynn_]

Hi! I'd like to give it a try. My strong suit is grammar, though I can also give plot and pacing suggestions. Though I'm brand new to this site, I have been editing (and writing) for a few years now.

Thanks Jennifer!

I tried PM-ing you, but your PMs are blocked. I think you need to click something in your User CP to let others PM you.

- Elle

This should help.

Please ensure you have switched on your Private Messages. Go to User CP (top left of this page) then click on Edit Options (in the left hand column) and then tick Enable Private Messaging in the second box down. Make sure that the next box down (Receive Private Messages only from Buddies and Moderators) is NOT ticked. Finally click Save Changes at the bottom of that page.