P Piaraq Virgin Joined Aug 27, 2008 Posts 4 Aug 27, 2008 #1 hello. I would be very grateful if someone has some 'spare' time to check over my first ever submission. It is 2,040 words long with some slight bdsm references. I know my grammar is in need of help. Thank you in advance. Maria.
hello. I would be very grateful if someone has some 'spare' time to check over my first ever submission. It is 2,040 words long with some slight bdsm references. I know my grammar is in need of help. Thank you in advance. Maria.
_Lynn_ Literotica Guru Joined Dec 12, 2006 Posts 49,483 Aug 28, 2008 #2 Piaraq said: hello. I would be very grateful if someone has some 'spare' time to check over my first ever submission. It is 2,040 words long with some slight bdsm references. I know my grammar is in need of help. Thank you in advance. Maria. Click to expand... I can look at it for you. PM me if you'd like my help.
Piaraq said: hello. I would be very grateful if someone has some 'spare' time to check over my first ever submission. It is 2,040 words long with some slight bdsm references. I know my grammar is in need of help. Thank you in advance. Maria. Click to expand... I can look at it for you. PM me if you'd like my help.
