First Time Writer

[LPCream]

Hey all, so I've been reading stories here for years and love it. I've written a few things from time to time but never actually published anyone on here. But I've decided to try to give something back so I have a first chapter written and I'd like some guidance please.

Anyone got a mo to look it over and let me know what they think? Yes it may need editing a bit but right now I'm just wondering if I'm wasting my time or if I should carry on?

It's about 2.5k words for chapter one, there are cuckold themes in it and I'm planning on it being a slow burner ... something that builds.

Any takers please?

 

[tomlitilia]

Try the editors forum. You'll get more takers there.

 

[LPCream]

Try the editors forum. You'll get more takers there.

Cheers ... was wondering. I'll repost this over there.

 

[LoquiSordidaAdMe]

Try the editors forum. You'll get more takers there.

In your request on the Editor's Forum, be sure to include the category of the story, the word count, and maybe a brief synopsis. Let the editors know what they're getting into with your story.

Best of luck, and welcome!