SidneySavage
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My first stab at writing erotica of any kind. If it sucks, please tell me it sucks, and what I can do to make it better.
Writing that was a lot of fun and intensely personal, but I won't be offended with criticisms, etc.
Thanks in advance.
My first stab at writing erotica of any kind. If it sucks, please tell me it sucks, and what I can do to make it better.
Writing that was a lot of fun and intensely personal, but I won't be offended with criticisms, etc.
Thanks in advance.