first time story writer - The Horseman

[dwise80]

Hiya folks...just interested in what you might have to say about my first submission to literotica...

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=165676

Hope you like it.

 

[Pure]

dw,

You'd get better results in the 'story feedback' forum or any unmoderated forum, for example the 'general' one.

If you want to join in what's happening here, and *give* as well as receive feedback, post your name in the 'sticky' marked thread
"Discussion, Feedback" and start joining in. If you want 'no strings', the places I first mentioned will get you something.

best
pure
unofficial traffic director, SDC