First time author seeks feedback

[Puddin36]

I have recently become a published author here on Lit. To date, I have submitted four stories and the latest one was published today.

I am looking for some feedback on my stories. Would also like to hear if there is anything that someone might suggest to make my stories even better.

Please read and enjoy my submissions and if you feel that my story deserves a vote.......PLEASE vote for it.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

 

[Puddin36]

*BUMP*

I see that people are viewing this thread, but I have had no comments thus far. Guess my thread died before I could even get it started. Thanks for reading it anyway.

By the way.........Chapter 5 has now been published as well.

 

[clcarne]

I liked it...

The anal scene was hot and so was the shower that proceeded it

I liked the swinging scenes too.

Fairly well writen, with good discriptive passages.

 

[Puddin36]

Re: I liked it...

The anal scene was hot and so was the shower that proceeded it

I liked the swinging scenes too.

Fairly well writen, with good discriptive passages.

clcarne........thanks so much for your comments. I am really glad that you took the time out to read this thread and make a comment, it is greatly appreciated. By chance, did you read the other Chapters in this series, and if so, what did you think about them?

 

[sack]

loved em'

These are hotter than hell stroke stories (my wallpaper is peeling!), and frankly you are so gifted why don't you try your hand at a longer story, with character development and sex as just the icing on the cake? You can do anything, so I would definitely try for a more involved one!!
And now, could you please read all 42 of my submissions?
Seriously, you may enjoy The Mask, a funny one, and The Little Candle Girl, a sad one. Thanks for the privilege of reading your great work!

Sack

 

[Puddin36]

Re: loved em'

These are hotter than hell stroke stories (my wallpaper is peeling!), and frankly you are so gifted why don't you try your hand at a longer story, with character development and sex as just the icing on the cake? You can do anything, so I would definitely try for a more involved one!!
And now, could you please read all 42 of my submissions?
Seriously, you may enjoy The Mask, a funny one, and The Little Candle Girl, a sad one. Thanks for the privilege of reading your great work!

Sack

Thanks so much for your post sack. I love your sense of humor as well. I actually LOL about the wallpaper peeling!! I do plan on writing more involved and longer stories in the future, but for now, what I have done thus far seems to be getting a lot of positive attention. Do you have a link for your stories? It sure would make it a lot easier for me as well as others that may read this thread to check them out.

Thanks again for reading my submissions and the great feedback that you gave me. It is very much appreciated.

 

[sack]

the link....

Hi! Impressive was nice enough to put a link to my stories in the Plug Your Own Story thread in the Author's Hangout. It's on the last page, as I recall. Happy reading!

Sack

 

[Puddin36]

Re: the link....

Hi! Impressive was nice enough to put a link to my stories in the Plug Your Own Story thread in the Author's Hangout. It's on the last page, as I recall. Happy reading!

Sack

As soon as I get some free private time, I will definately look up your link and read your submissions. Have a great day!!