First submit

[FJSullyIII]

How's it goin'?
Well, I did my 1st submit in 'Erotic Couplings', namely, 'First Date with Sharon'.
It wasn't my 1st date; just a 1st date with 'Sharon'.
Anyway, let me know what ya'll think...good, bad, whatever...
Good, solid, criticism wouldn't hurt, and I appreciate any feedback.
Don't worry! I can handle it!
thanks
FJS
ps I have another one to share after my ist one gets approved. (if it does)

 

[KillerMuffin]

You'll find the Story Feedback forum three doors down the hall to your left. We don't do feedback here.

It's helpful if you include a link. Just go to your story, copy the address in the address bar, and then paste it into your post.

Have a lovely evening and congrats on your posting.

 

[openthighs_sarah]

KM, that was extraordinary. (And congrats and good luck, FJS.)