First Story.

[slut_4daddy]

I just wrote my first story and posted it today. I know I'm just being impatient, but does anybody know how long it takes to show up?

Does this sound like something you would keep reading?:

I wash the floor on my hands and knees, my blond hair dragging in the mud while my master looks on amused. It gives him pleasure to see me in pain or humiliated. I keep my body close to the floor, knowing that if I lift it too much, I will be punished. Sure enough, I am too high off the ground and his boot comes down on me once again. “I want your tits to drag bitch.” I lower myself both physically and with humbly. I am his cunt. I must do as he commands.

“Who’s little cunt are you?” he demands, as if reading my thoughts.

“Yours Sir,” I answer promptly and with, I hope, the proper amount of humility.

 

[Quiet_Cool]

I just wrote my first story and posted it today. I know I'm just being impatient, but does anybody know how long it takes to show up?

Does this sound like something you would keep reading?:

I wash the floor on my hands and knees, my blond hair dragging in the mud while my master looks on amused. It gives him pleasure to see me in pain or humiliated. I keep my body close to the floor, knowing that if I lift it too much, I will be punished. Sure enough, I am too high off the ground and his boot comes down on me once again. “I want your tits to drag bitch.” I lower myself both physically and with humbly. I am his cunt. I must do as he commands.

“Who’s little cunt are you?” he demands, as if reading my thoughts.

“Yours Sir,” I answer promptly and with, I hope, the proper amount of humility.

I wouldn't, no, but I'm not one for BDSM. Well, not often. It does have an audience, not only on Lit. in general, but here on the AH. So I'm sure it'll get plenty of reads.

Oh, and that impatience is normal. It'll take, approx. 117 days, give or take.



Q_C

























Ok, I'm fucking with you. On average, a couple days, but there are slow times when it can take longer.

 

[dr_mabeuse]

It's been taking between about 5-14 days for new stories to post.

And for me, no, your story has no appeal. I like BDSM, but I don't like female humiliation and degradation. I find such women unattractive and degradation not only unerotic, but anti-erotic. I don't like seeing anyone crawl, even if they enjoy it.

--dr.M.

 

[slut_4daddy]

I wouldn't, no, but I'm not one for BDSM. Well, not often. It does have an audience, not only on Lit. in general, but here on the AH. So I'm sure it'll get plenty of reads.

Oh, and that impatience is normal. It'll take, approx. 117 days, give or take.



Q_C

117 Days! You are kidding right? Please!!!!

Your av looks like you'd be one for BDSM. What kind of stories do you like?
























Ok, I'm fucking with you. On average, a couple days, but there are slow times when it can take longer.[/QUOTE]

 

[Quiet_Cool]

117 Days! You are kidding right? Please!!!!

Your av looks like you'd be one for BDSM. What kind of stories do you like?

As the good Doctor pointed out, we're looking at 5-14 in actuality. It used to be 2-3, but things change, and Laurel and manu have their hands full pretty much all the time.

As for the AV. It's Brandon Lee from "The Crow." Not sure what the BDSM connection might be, but, it is what it is, I guess.

As for my story types. I can read anything with a good storyline (literaly, meaning plot-driven, not just fucking), but here on Lit. I tend to stick to things like Sci-Fi/ fantasy, Horror, and Group Sex. Okay, so the Group Sex can be just fucking. I'd add erotic couplings or loving wives, but finding quality among how many thousands of stories isn't so easy, unless you click the links provided by our writers here in the AH, that is.

If I haven't seen you before, welcome to the AH, S4D.

Q_C

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

It's been taking between about 5-14 days for new stories to post.

And for me, no, your story has no appeal. I like BDSM, but I don't like female humiliation and degradation. I find such women unattractive and degradation not only unerotic, but anti-erotic. I don't like seeing anyone crawl, even if they enjoy it.

--dr.M.

Both OC and Doc are right. For some reason the wait seems much longer now that is usually the case. Three days, give or take a day, is about the norm. I've had a story pending for almost a week. The odd this is the total number of stories on the NEW list is the smallest I can remember. It's usually about seven pages long, but was only five when I checked earlier today.

As for your story, I probably wouldn't keep reading but that's primarily due to the subject, not your writing.

Rumple Foreskin

 

[slut_4daddy]

It's been taking between about 5-14 days for new stories to post.

And for me, no, your story has no appeal. I like BDSM, but I don't like female humiliation and degradation. I find such women unattractive and degradation not only unerotic, but anti-erotic. I don't like seeing anyone crawl, even if they enjoy it.

--dr.M.

Nothing gets me hotter than being humiliated by Daddy, and forced to crawl. But Daddy's not as mean as the Master in this story. I just wrote this one for fun.

 

[slut_4daddy]

Everyone so far has said this is not for them. Is there really people here who would enjoy it?

P.S.- thank you QC for the welcome.

 

[Quiet_Cool]

Everyone so far has said this is not for them. Is there really people here who would enjoy it?

P.S.- thank you QC for the welcome.

Oh, yeah. You met Tatelou yet? There're several other people here into that sort of thing (I just remember her cuz I read a story or two of hers and they were pretty well-written--and she's vocal), not to mention that the majority of us are into pretty much everything. Yeah, there's an audience here for it.

And honestly, if there wasn't, would you really change what you are writing? I hope not. The rest of us here never would.

Q_C

 

[cantdog]

I think I would eventually become embarrassed when my erotic stories about peanuts bombed time after time. I might realize that people just thought I was icky, with all the peanuts and stuff. It might make me flee, or it might make me change. To cashews or even filberts. Under another name. Of course, I'm talking completely hypothetically.



Welcome to the forum, slut_4.

 

[Mya Wencha]

Everyone so far has said this is not for them. Is there really people here who would enjoy it?

P.S.- thank you QC for the welcome.

I enjoy it!!! My daddy has never been so humiliating as the master in your story, but I can tell you that if it turns him on it turns me on, no matter what, its just a connection, you understand slut_4daddy. I am with you on this!!!!

 

[Quiet_Cool]

I think I would eventually become embarrassed when my erotic stories about peanuts bombed time after time. I might realize that people just thought I was icky, with all the peanuts and stuff. It might make me flee, or it might make me change. To cashews or even filberts. Under another name. Of course, I'm talking completely hypothetically.



Welcome to the forum, slut_4.

Shit! Another newbie who's really an oldie?

No wonder I can't remember anyone, they're someone new every afternoon. lol

It's getting to the point where everyone blends together.

Shit, you all look alike to me.

*ducks and hides*

Q_C

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

I think I would eventually become embarrassed when my erotic stories about peanuts bombed time after time. I might realize that people just thought I was icky, with all the peanuts and stuff.

Don't be so fast pulling that trigger, Cantdog. Think about it, Lucy and Peppermint Patty might be perfect for some BDSM or Non-Consent, the little redhead girl has possibilities and there are rumors Snoopy is already hanging around the AH.

Rumple Foreskin

 

[cantdog]

Gawd, Rumple.

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

Gawd, Rumple.

Cantdog, we're old friends, just call me, Rumple.

Rumple Foreskin

 

[Mya Wencha]

bump it