First Story Questions

[SouthernErotica]

I have a questionable story ready for submission. However it does feature a person under age. This story is actually a retelling of my first orgasm. The story is taboo but I'd love some feed back. I have it posted on a personal blog where I keep my own erotica writings. I was curious. Would it be okay to post the link of that story here? I'm not trying to cause any trouble or problems. I only want honest feed back on my first bit of erotica. Though it features a person underage, the person is actually myself. The story, even though taboo to some, was an amazing experience to myself.

Any feedback. WHATSOEVER on my questions and comments. Thanks!

 

[nakdsub]

No!

However; there are lots of other story sites out there that do not have the same restrictions as Literotica.
Stories on line dot net
erotic stories dot com
stories.xnxx dot com
The Kristen archives
just to name a few.

As far as I'm concerned, Literotica is the cream of the crop, but it's restrictions do make it a little more selective than most.

Good luck.

One more suggestion, can you simply change the age to 18?

 

[SouthernErotica]

Thank you for your help!


If I change the age to 18. It does ruin the story. The fact is that the age creates a sense of naught and taboo. If its changed.... it just doesn't have the same affect.

 

[nakdsub]

my suggestion

is post it on stories on line dot net. It's probably the second best and a lot of the authors here also post there.

 

[bronzeage]

I have a questionable story ready for submission. However it does feature a person under age. This story is actually a retelling of my first orgasm. The story is taboo but I'd love some feed back. I have it posted on a personal blog where I keep my own erotica writings. I was curious. Would it be okay to post the link of that story here? I'm not trying to cause any trouble or problems. I only want honest feed back on my first bit of erotica. Though it features a person underage, the person is actually myself. The story, even though taboo to some, was an amazing experience to myself.

Any feedback. WHATSOEVER on my questions and comments. Thanks!

It is possible for a character to describe past experiences in first person voice. I have a few in my stories. Do not give specific ages or other information which makes it plain the character is a minor.

It is permissible to link to a personal blog or website, but if it requires a password of contains spam ads, it could get booted.

 

[nakdsub]

Maybe use a term

Like, "I was young, younger than I should have been," don't tell the age, just insinuate.