Hi All,
Just had my first story posted and am amazed and heartened to recieve so much good feedback (even the critisisms are constructive!). Many thanks all who have read and/or voted/responded. I would love to have more comments and suggestions so please review and respond.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=93006
(Liz's Revenge)
Thanks in advance
Wolfie39
Just had my first story posted and am amazed and heartened to recieve so much good feedback (even the critisisms are constructive!). Many thanks all who have read and/or voted/responded. I would love to have more comments and suggestions so please review and respond.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=93006
(Liz's Revenge)
Thanks in advance
Wolfie39
