First story, Need an editor

[greathands660]

This is my first story attempt. Ineed someone to edit for structure, continuity, flow, and anything else that they may see wrong. It is a loving wife story about a vacation with her 2 sisters. It's pure fantasy but a guy's mind can wonder. It may be to long for this forum (20+ pages). I am willing to listen to all critisizm and maybe I can learn something. Thanks DBH

 

[LadyCibelle]

This is my first story attempt. Ineed someone to edit for structure, continuity, flow, and anything else that they may see wrong. It is a loving wife story about a vacation with her 2 sisters. It's pure fantasy but a guy's mind can wonder. It may be to long for this forum (20+ pages). I am willing to listen to all critisizm and maybe I can learn something. Thanks DBH

If my editing plate wasn't so full I'd be happy to give you a hand. Unfortunately I'm overflowing with work and it would take me too long to get to your story.

Maybe you could try taking a look at the Editor's List, even though it's not the best solution to find an editor but it's better than nothing. Or you could take a look at the List of Alternate Editors post #20 I'm sure you'll find one there.

Good luck

 

[BigDick8870]

If anyone on list hasn't worked for you, PM me and I'll get back to you.

Jay

 

[XineMead]

I'm Available

This is my first story attempt. Ineed someone to edit for structure, continuity, flow, and anything else that they may see wrong. It is a loving wife story about a vacation with her 2 sisters. It's pure fantasy but a guy's mind can wonder. It may be to long for this forum (20+ pages). I am willing to listen to all critisizm and maybe I can learn something. Thanks DBH

Hi, just wondering if you were able to locate an editor. I'm listed on the volunteer editor page but not busy at the moment. Let me know if you still need someone--feel free to PM.

XM