First story - looking for a female editor to help with realism

[daytr1pper]

I met a woman online and we've become increasingly flirty and fantasizing with one another. She wrote me a pretty hot encounter between us.
I'd like to reciprocate and wrote what I'd like to think could be a somewhat realistic encounter between us.

The reality is I've only been with one woman and only know what 'worked' for us. And I'm not sure it's normal or usual.

So as I'm writing this encounter, I'm writing it with what I'm guessing is normal. I want it to be realistic. I want her to feel like she's in the story. I don't want to write something that's totally unrealistic and pull her out of the story and fantasy.
I've read those stories where the woman is perfect in every way, the guy has a 50 foot cock, and they have sex for 24 hours with over 3000 orgasms each. And that's not what I want to write.

I want it to be loving and titillating.

I am still in the midst of writing it. I'm maybe 1/2 to 2/3 done. I just want to have someone ready, at their leisure, to give it a once over.
And I prefer a woman because I know how my anatomy works and what feels good, but am not experienced on the female side (and I don't think porn is usually realistic).

Thanks in advance.

Feel free to PM.

 

[Sappho_CGN]

How old are you?

This is also a question of generation, how a contact starts. The younger the lady, the more adventurous she would be ... as a rule of the thumb.

I am not young anymore, so my assumptions about behaviour could be too old-school. And I am not a native English speaker

 

[daytr1pper]

Thanks Sappho - someone did reach out to me for editing. If it falls through, I'll come find you!