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http://www.literotica.com/s/carl-and-cassie
Category: Mature
Quick synopsis: Cassie, recently turned 18, has had a crush on her neighbor, Carl (68), since she was 15. Unfortunately, Carl, who used to have quite the sex drive, has started to close himself off from his former friends and the world at large after the death of his wife, Anna. With Cassie's parents off on a trip for the summer, she decides to seduce her old friend to satisfy her needs and to get Carl back to being the man he used to be.
Hey ya'll, after lurking and enjoying everyone's stories for the past few years, I decided to release my first story. It came out a week ago but I was hoping to get some critiquing so I would know how to improve as writer. I realize I'm quite the noob when it comes to writing erotic fiction and its been some time since I've written anything aside from academic papers, so I do apologize if it's not very good, I just wanted to take a stab at writing and then work on making the next one better. I did read it over again before starting this thread and did notice a lot of stupid mistakes that could have been fixed by having it edited again, and I'll be sure to have any future stories/installments double checked by someone before submitting them.
As always, I thank you for spending time looking at my submission and I appreciate all criticism, no matter how brutal.
Category: Mature
Quick synopsis: Cassie, recently turned 18, has had a crush on her neighbor, Carl (68), since she was 15. Unfortunately, Carl, who used to have quite the sex drive, has started to close himself off from his former friends and the world at large after the death of his wife, Anna. With Cassie's parents off on a trip for the summer, she decides to seduce her old friend to satisfy her needs and to get Carl back to being the man he used to be.
Hey ya'll, after lurking and enjoying everyone's stories for the past few years, I decided to release my first story. It came out a week ago but I was hoping to get some critiquing so I would know how to improve as writer. I realize I'm quite the noob when it comes to writing erotic fiction and its been some time since I've written anything aside from academic papers, so I do apologize if it's not very good, I just wanted to take a stab at writing and then work on making the next one better. I did read it over again before starting this thread and did notice a lot of stupid mistakes that could have been fixed by having it edited again, and I'll be sure to have any future stories/installments double checked by someone before submitting them.
As always, I thank you for spending time looking at my submission and I appreciate all criticism, no matter how brutal.
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