First Story and I need some help

lioness55

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I just got my first story submitted on the site today. I know it needs some work and I was hoping to get some feedback from the readers. Should I continue with the storyline or scrap it and try again anew? The title is "Meet Me in New Orleans" and will end up on the interracial board once it leaves the new board.

Thanks in advance for your help
 
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