First Read? Incest/Religion -2000 words

[Selena_Kitt]

I have 2000 words of a story started for Nude Day... and I'd like someone to do a first read... no editing... just tell me if you'd keep reading...

warning: it's incest and has religious overtones... but no sex yet, so nothing to offend yet even if you don't read the cat...

anyone?

Bueller?
Bueller?

 

[MissBri]

 

[neonlyte]

Yep - send it over, please.

 

[Selena_Kitt]

Does anyone want to do an edit on the full version?

I've got it done, now...

 

[S-Des]

Does anyone want to do an edit on the full version?

I've got it done, now...

You know I don't edit, but you know I love your work. I'll be happy to do a read through and give you my opinion (doesn't cost you anything and you can ignore what I think). The only catch is I'm leaving for work and won't be home until 9:00 CT. If you don't mind waiting, you can send it over and I promise to look at it before anything else.

 

[neonlyte]

I'd love to offer, but you need a real editor, mine sucks - as you know
On the other hand, I'm pretty anxious to see how it ends.

 

[Selena_Kitt]

I'd love to offer, but you need a real editor, mine sucks - as you know
On the other hand, I'm pretty anxious to see how it ends.

Did you just say... that your editor sucks? lol

 

[neonlyte]

Did you just say... that your editor sucks? lol

You know full well what I meant... Ms Smartypants
And I think my point is proven in the sentence what I wrote.

 

[Selena_Kitt]

You know full well what I meant... Ms Smartypants
And I think my point is proven in the sentence what I wrote.

I wasn't gonna say it... *grin*

*checking panties to see if they are, indeed, smart*

 

[Selena_Kitt]

Thanks, you guys, for looking at it for me... it's up now... in my sig line... if you were interested in the finished product.

 

[frozen_north]

Absolutely loved it!!!

 

[Selena_Kitt]

Absolutely loved it!!!

thank you.