First post of a story (gay theme)

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It was later in the evening at the health club and I was in the sauna. The door opened and a young guy walked in that could not be ignored. I found myself being disappointed that he was wearing a towel as fantasies began to emerge from my mind. It’s rare for me to have wanted a man as much or as quickly as I wanted him, but my cock had not hesitated in casting its vote. That quick glance brought a surge of blood to my surprised loins and my breath quickened a little too loudly. His body was slim but well-defined and his stomach was ripped. His dark hair was medium length and his face was flawless. I just had to see what kind of a perfect cock was hidden beneath that towel.

I tried to not show my own shaft’s obvious interest by shifting away so that he could not easily see how excited I was becoming. Then he laid back and bent one leg shifting his towel so that I could partially see the object of my desire. He was deliciously uncut, quite large and my lips involuntarily parted. Luckily he kept his eyes closed and didn’t seem to notice my obvious lust. To my delight, he shifted to get more comfortable and his towel fell to either side. There I was staring at the most beautiful cock I had ever seen. It slid across his left thigh and stopped so I got the full view I shamefully desired.

I could see its shiny tip perfectly encircled by the tanned uncut skin that framed it. His cock was longer soft that mine was hard and I ached to touch it with all of my body. Suddenly he said, “Take a picture, it will last longer.” I was thoroughly embarrassed and finally blinked as I dropped my gaze. He said, “No need to apologize if you’re going to do something about it.” I couldn’t believe my ears. This guy had opened the door for me to fulfill a long-held fantasy, and I did so want to feel and taste him inside of me just as I had fantasized a hundred times but had never dared to enjoy in a man. I checked to see that no one was in sight and then moved over to the lower bench just in front of where he was laying. He watched me without saying a word but his cock was already growing and I watched it pulsate as it gently bounced against his stomach. I saw that he was smiling and staring at my raging erection. I was embarrassed again but he said, “I see you want this as much as I do.”

That was the last urging that I needed. I used my own towel to cushion my knees and perched myself over his mid-section and took in the view from close up. He surely had a beautiful body with that perfect cock that was now as hard as my own. I could see the pre-cum starting to ooze from the tip of his emerging head. I delayed just a second as I realized there was no going back now. I touched my finger to the perfect globule on his cock and he reacted with a sudden quiver through his hips. I put my finger to my tongue tasting his cum and was glad for it. The mix of his sweet and salty essence was captivating and made me all the more excited to know I was sharing such illicit sex with this perfect, obviously horny, beautiful male. He not only wanted me to do this with him, it was clearly his preference. And despite being in the sauna, nothing could make us hotter than my sucking his cock right then and there in that risky, public place.

I didn’t hesitate any longer. I gently lifted his cock with my fingers and circled my tongue around the tip. His body shuddered involuntarily and that brought a smile of ecstasy to his perfect face. I explored the intimate circular crevice between the head of his cock and his overlapping foreskin. I started stroking him and feeling his soft skin over his unbelievable hardness. I gently coaxed his foreskin past the ridge of the head all the way up until the tip of his cock disappeared behind the ruffled edges. I marveled at how sexy this guy was as I caressed his cock inflaming my own erection as never before. And then I slowly moved my hand back downward fully exposing the head with a drop of precum overflowing as I stroked him. I was so captured by my front-row-seat watching my greatest fantasy come true that I almost forgot what I was there to do.

I didn’t want to just give this guy a hand job. I wanted him to give himself to me with abandon and wildly “lose it” in an orgasmic explosive gusher of his essence nourishing my body with lust. That’s when I tried to see how much of him I could take into me. At first I could get no more than half his enormous shaft inside my mouth. But I relaxed to better control my gag reflex. By concentrating on his musty smell, his delightful taste and the excitement of having this perfect man’s cock in my mouth, the gag reflex was soon forgotten and the farther down my throat he slid. I was surprised and he gasped when I started to feel his cock enter my throat and his curly pubic hairs tickling my right cheek. A sexy rhythm was building with his cock bumping against the back of my throat and I picked up the pace. Just seconds later I felt my lips touch the hilt of his engorged shaft. I heard him gasp loudly and we both stopped moving to savor that incredibly incredible moment. I knew no one had ever done this to him before. He was mine. His cock was mine and there was nothing he could do to avoid giving me the full experience that was building into a glorious eruption from deep in his loins.

My head began bobbing knowing full well what was about to happen. I was rotating his perfectly proportioned balls following the same rhythm of his heavy breaths as my lips and throat slid relentlessly over his manhood shamelessly forcing my mouth to push ever-harder against his pelvis. His deepening groans warned me that the moment of truth was near. His hips and whole body starting to move up and down in perfect rhythm while I quickly inserted my middle finger into his anus. He was so sweaty that it acted as a lubricant and went in easily. I could feel his excited prostate gland on the end of my finger and I rubbed at it furiously as I felt him let lose. The flood of seamen erupted from his cock into the back of my throat with a gush that could not be consumed. His cum rushed past my lips, down the sides of his cock mingling with his soft pubic hair. That overflow of pearl white cum made him glide in and out as I swallowed constantly trying to keep up with the flood of his juices. When I could tell that his climax was finally subsiding, I withdrew my finger and went back to massaging his balls matching the decreasing rhythm of my head bobbing on his softening cock. The remaining cum in my mouth was quite salty and I started to use my tongue as a spatula to clean his manhood.

He laughed and told me that someone had walked into the sauna just a minute before but he was not about to stop me. We agreed that we had better leave before we were confronted. He offered that I should come over to his place and finished what we had started.
 
This was a fine short scene.

The lust and yearn well-described.

I didn't close-read to analyze, but in a brief reading it felt smooth, so felt no need to pick the hacksaw and magnifying glass out of the toolbox. Especially since the post wasn't accompanied with requests for such things.
 
This was my first post ever in this type of room

I'm glad to receive the feedback, pro or con, to improve my writing. I've actually not written any erotic stories before, nor ever sucked a man's penis. I was molested at 15, but in my drunken stupor I was not able to enjoy it as I might have. Now I've been married 25+ years and only fantasize about such things. Obviously, my imagination has remained active.

If this is well-received, I'll try a heterosexual story. Women are my overall preference but the "forbidden cock" is inviting.
 
Sorry - I'm still learning

Not intentional at all. I just don't know what features are available and how to access them. I'll attempt to see what I can do.
 
Question

If I turn on the "private message" feature, will that pop up when I am at work? I am not someone that uses instant messaging at all so I'm a novice at when messages pop up and when they don't That could be an embarrassment if they pop up when I'm at work or when my wife is nearby.
 
http://www.literotica.com/stories/index.php

From there you can choose log in at top, then you choose 'forum' (notice submit is also amongst the links where 'forum' link is, thats were you wanna go to submit your story).

Clicking forum will take you to your forum control panel. There are options and stuff on the left side of that.
 
In my browser private message prompting only pops up when I open a literotica page. I assume the places were you open literotica pages are also places were a private message prompt is tolerable.

Depending what settings you use you will also get an email upon private messages.
 
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