First Poem Posted

[stillgoodenuff]

HI there,

I guess this is the right place to post a poem link for some feed back. This is my first attempt at such a feat and would welcome any comments at all.

Thanks

Crescendo
By Stillgoodenuff

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?page=1000&id=46217

 

[karmadog]

A better place to post this would be the poetry forum. Not every prose writer participates in poetry discussions and vice versa. If you've never posted there before, it might be a good idea to critique someone else who has asked. That tends to insure that at least the person you critiqued will answer your call.

Good luck and welcome!