first night rights! great idea

[atmos]

hey i have an idea you might like. a girl works in a company and signed a contract etc. but she was soo happy to get the job she didnt read the small print in which it clearly states that her 50 year old boss gets first night rights if she was to get married. she gets engaged and as soon as she is married he tells her and she has no choice as she needs the job bad and he will make sure she never works again etc. anyway for hubby i see two routes either she tells him but he has no choice but to go along with it or....she tells her boss that he would kill him so the boss gives her a drug which will knock him out. that night she slips it in his drink and he passes out on the bed the boss comes in and has his wicked and nasty way with her next to her sleeping husband. they make a lot but people assume it is the happy couple. anyway after that night hubby wakes up and doesnt remember anything and she says it ok as she does and that she had a great night and that she is sure she will have many more and cant wait to get back to work lol.

as an idea i love this one, for my own taste though the boss would have to be hung like a horse and much bigger than hubby and very nasty and a little rough but ill leave that up to people that know how to write stories lol.

Atmos

 

[NASCARaddicted]

what about this one:

a guy wants to marry a girl. But before the wedding, they visit the parents of the girl (for the first time). Both parents are happy about the planned wedding. But they know that their daughter is against sex before marriage.

Suddenly, the mother says: Before the wedding, she has to test if he is good for her daughter ..... good in bed ...

 

[atmos]

does no one else like the idea. any writers ???????? please ?????

 

[Jenny _S]

does no one else like the idea. any writers ???????? please ?????

This idea is a thing from the dark ages in europe. I don't agree that your idea would be believable in the modern world. It would need to be a period piece with Knights and Ladies and Castles and all that.

To make it work in the modern world you would have to suspend our reality, which can be done, but you would have to replace it with an alternate reality to bring the reader's comfort level up to an acceptable level. Because of the length required to lay the ground work for your alternate world, I don't think it would get much read.

 

[Couture]

You should check out PAmagazine. It's a whole alternate universe where secretary's exist for the pleasure of their boss's.

http://groups.yahoo.com/group/pa-magazine/

 

[Jenny _S]

You should check out PAmagazine. It's a whole alternate universe where secretary's exist for the pleasure of their boss's.

http://groups.yahoo.com/group/pa-magazine/

Couture,
Philip K. Dick wrote about nothing but alternate universes (Man in the High Castle, CounterClock World, Do Androids Dream of Electiric Sheep, etc.) along with many other authors. I personally just find it hard to create one within, say, 3-5000 words and have an interesting short story that will hold the reader's attention on Lit.

That's why I would suggest a period piece. The writer could concentrate on the story because the universe already exitsts and it would require very little to bring the reader into that reality.

 

[zorrro69]

Bad deal

What about this idea - the boss only wants to watch how the couple make sex during the wedding night. They both agreed. But when the bride and the groom have to show their lovemaking, the young man cant gain erection. Then the boss calls a group of 2-3 (or may be 5-7 or even may be 20-30) of men and each of them take his turn with the bride.

 

[TabooTeller]

hey i have an idea you might like. a girl works in a company and signed a contract etc. but she was soo happy to get the job she didnt read the small print in which it clearly states that her 50 year old boss gets first night rights if she was to get married. she gets engaged and as soon as she is married he tells her and she has no choice as she needs the job bad and he will make sure she never works again etc. anyway for hubby i see two routes either she tells him but he has no choice but to go along with it or....she tells her boss that he would kill him so the boss gives her a drug which will knock him out. that night she slips it in his drink and he passes out on the bed the boss comes in and has his wicked and nasty way with her next to her sleeping husband. they make a lot but people assume it is the happy couple. anyway after that night hubby wakes up and doesnt remember anything and she says it ok as she does and that she had a great night and that she is sure she will have many more and cant wait to get back to work lol.

as an idea i love this one, for my own taste though the boss would have to be hung like a horse and much bigger than hubby and very nasty and a little rough but ill leave that up to people that know how to write stories lol.

Atmos

This idea could be good for those who like such stories. Its my usual cup of tea. I would have the boss take the drug and
think he had sex not the husband. Or get him so drunk he doesn't know who is who and they hire a prostitute, but as I said for those who like these types of idea this one is good.


TabooTeller

 

[Couture]

I think it would be difficult as well Jenny. That's why I posted the link to an alternate universe that was already created. One could post a short story and everyone there would 'get it'.


So you like Dick, do you? Philip K Dick that is?

 

[Jenny _S]

I think it would be difficult as well Jenny. That's why I posted the link to an alternate universe that was already created. One could post a short story and everyone there would 'get it'.


So you like Dick, do you? Philip K Dick that is?

I loved PK Dick. I cried when he died a few years ago. All his stories were so very different from the other sci-fi out there. Early on he created his alternate reality and all his work fell so easily into that reality.

 

[Colleen Thomas]

The contract portion of the idea is the problem. You can't enter into a contract that violates your rights. Any court will hold it unconcionable.

How bout a slight alteration. Let us assume the secretary has a degree in something else, perhaps marketing or finanace but is working as a secretary because in the depressed enconomy it's all she could get. Suppose the boss has an opening in the marketing department for a really good salary and benefits.

Suppose he offers a devil's bargain. Give up your virginity to me on your weddingnight and I will see to it that you get the job. It would lead to the long discussion with her husband to be and add most of the elements of your idea, but wouldn't ask people to suspend their disbelief so much. I personally know two young women who hold good jobs beacuse they had no qualms about crawling under the boss's desk when push came to shove. It does happen so it isn't as unbelieveable.

-Colly

 

[TabooTeller]

The contract portion of the idea is the problem. You can't enter into a contract that violates your rights. Any court will hold it unconcionable.

How bout a slight alteration. Let us assume the secretary has a degree in something else, perhaps marketing or finanace but is working as a secretary because in the depressed enconomy it's all she could get. Suppose the boss has an opening in the marketing department for a really good salary and benefits.

Suppose he offers a devil's bargain. Give up your virginity to me on your weddingnight and I will see to it that you get the job. It would lead to the long discussion with her husband to be and add most of the elements of your idea, but wouldn't ask people to suspend their disbelief so much. I personally know two young women who hold good jobs beacuse they had no qualms about crawling under the boss's desk when push came to shove. It does happen so it isn't as unbelieveable.

-Colly

First a correction. I should have typed It is Not My usual cup of Tea, but saying that I think as I said already in other words, it could work. Maybe its a small town and that is the main job source for most of the young girls. And the contract has a written section and non written section. The boss tells each girl about the nonwritten section himself. Many think they will be able to find another job before they end up getting married. Or other then that sitpualtion he is a good boss and so many women forget that clause.

TabooTeller