First few "erotic" stories

ChristyLR

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I wrote one story about 2 weeks ago. It's mostly a tragic romance fantasy, and I'd put it in the loving wives category. The point of the story is not erotic, but the whole story is about sex. I consider it bettter written than the one I just wrote today, but the end needs more detail. I am just kind of at a point where I don't know what to do. I don't want anyone to be brutally honest about my story, and I don't want to waste anyone's time, so if you'd like to see that one and give me suggestions, e-mail me at Fr0zenfeather@aol.com. If I sound like I don't know what I'm talking about when it comes to the sex, that might be because I'm a virgin.

The other one is a fantasy, and it's based on something that's happened to me. I'd say it's kind of crappy, but it has potential I think. It's kind of a romance/fantasy/obsessive lover story with a bit of vore. The sexual part is not very explicit.

When you e-mail me, tell me which story you'd like.
 
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