First Erotica

[Diamondbarrow]

Hi. Forgive the nervousness of my typing, as this is kind of a stretch for me to do. I've been writing this Science Fiction novel for a few months now, and one of the main focuses is the relations ship between the main character, a genetically and cybernetically enhanced former soldier, and his lover, Sara, a secretary with a love of 'dance.' This is simply one of their countless couplings, and will probably be the source of most of my Erotica. Anyway, i'd love it if you'd take a look, and look forward to any feedback/criticism you have. Thanks for your time.

Story Title: A Love Scene

Section: Erotic Couplings

Link: http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=194604

 

[msboy8]

Hi. Forgive the nervousness of my typing, as this is kind of a stretch for me to do. I've been writing this Science Fiction novel for a few months now, and one of the main focuses is the relations ship between the main character, a genetically and cybernetically enhanced former soldier, and his lover, Sara, a secretary with a love of 'dance.' This is simply one of their countless couplings, and will probably be the source of most of my Erotica. Anyway, i'd love it if you'd take a look, and look forward to any feedback/criticism you have. Thanks for your time.

Story Title: A Love Scene

Section: Erotic Couplings

Link: http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=194604

I R.V.C.ed your story. Great story. Thanks.

 

[J.Q. Hack]

Nice job for a first time story. The story was sensual and the writing was very nice. Keep up the good work and I hope to see more stories to fill the back story in.

J.Q. Hack

 

[Diamondbarrow]

Thanks! I'm very pleased with it so far. It's been getting all 4s and 5s. I especially enjoy the remarks about my skill as an author, and not getting a bunch of comments written in 'l33t' speak... no offense meant to anyone that does. Thanks again!

 

[windstormy]

Hi. Forgive the nervousness of my typing, as this is kind of a stretch for me to do. I've been writing this Science Fiction novel for a few months now, and one of the main focuses is the relations ship between the main character, a genetically and cybernetically enhanced former soldier, and his lover, Sara, a secretary with a love of 'dance.' This is simply one of their countless couplings, and will probably be the source of most of my Erotica. Anyway, i'd love it if you'd take a look, and look forward to any feedback/criticism you have. Thanks for your time.

Story Title: A Love Scene

Section: Erotic Couplings

Link: http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=194604

Enjoyed your story. Let a comment underneath. I really liked the smoothness and the flow of this story. Very good....

 

[dis_pac]

Left me wanting more, but in a good way!

Your characters are exceptionally well written. The rest of the story is going to be a knock-out. Keep up the good work.

 

[Kirk482002]

My first story was a light year behind yours in quality. Very well done.

 

[Diamondbarrow]

Thanks! That really means a lot! I'm working on the second part of the erotica, and i've posted the prologue and first chapter of the main story in the non-erotic section. It's called Paradigm Shift, and it's a sci-fi book with a Cyberpunk flavor. If you feel like reading something besides erotica, check it out, but i understand if you don't

Here's the link: http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=196229