Here you go guys. I started this about 30 minutes ago on a whim. Let me know what you think. I will not be offended if you dont like it, but I would love to here if you like it or not!
Ive only read a couple of stories of this type ever, so if it is bad, please bear with me.
I call it "Noelle" It is a simple story about straight sex between a young couple who havent seen each other in weeks.
without further ado...
It has been weeks since I have seen her. Experienced her smell, her feel.
Her mother was in the hospital for months, not only taking all her time, but destroying her sex drive. Her mother made a miraculous recovery. Only seconds from now that door will open the bathroom door and I will be able to sleep next to Noelle for the first time in who knows how long.
I lay in bed, nude. A thin sheet covers my body, thin and full of static, the blanket sticks to my skin, giving a revealing look of my body even when covered. I was semi-hard, on my way to complete. Just the thought of the heat coming from her body as she lies next to me makes me shiver. I brush my hand near my penis, it is firm and more than ready.
Her time away has done wonders to her. When Noelle wasn’t visiting her mother she was at her house helping with the months of backed up chores. I can tell. Her body has never been this toned and tight. This is quite a feat. Her body is tighter than the most well developed college girl I have seen.
Just then the bathroom door opens. There is Noelle standing there in a thin, sexy gown. Her red curly hair falls slightly below her breasts, concealing the nipple peeking through the sheer cloth. Her green eyes, though barely visible in the candle light, still brightly burn in my brain. She smells of perfume, her legs smoothly waxed, skin barely tanned. She knows how I burn for her. She gives me a sexy smirk. I cannot take it anymore. I stand up, lunge over, and take her into my arms.
Our lips instantly lock. My hands go around her waist and make their way up to her hair. Her cool, slightly damp hair turns steamy quickly as I supper her head and kiss her with more passion. She lightly flicks my lip with her tongue before moving in further. Her breath tastes sweet. Never have I felt a mouth so soft. The combination of her supple tongue and sweet saliva makes me feel like my entire mouth is melting. Something I have rarely felt before.
I pull away and she lies back on the bed. The low cut gown falls to the side, exposing the freckles on her shoulder. She moves, lets out a silent moan, and the gown slips off over her breast. Her nipple is exposed. Bright pink, perfectly round. The air is cool in the bedroom. While her nipple is small, it is as firm and erect as I have ever seen it.
I lean over her, immediately kissing her neck. Her moans are audible now, her hot breath hits my neck. My penis enlarges even more, rubbing up against her inner thigh. Her legs tightly wrap around me.
I move up, kissing her behind her ear, eventually giving her ear lobe a bite. I lean up a little bit. Her legs still clutched around me. I unbutton the one button actually buttoned on the front of her gown, exposing both breasts. I pull off the gown, leaving her only in her light pink panties. Simple but enormously sexy.
I begin kissing her neck again, but quickly move down to her chest and eventually to her nipple. I flick her nipple with my tongue and proceed to lightly suck. She is getting short of breath; I can feel the heat coming off of her vagina through her panties. Gripping her left breast in my head, I rub her nipple, making it even more erect.
I pull up, Noelle releases her leg’s grip off of my body. I lean over, this time my face over her belly button. I kiss it, and slowly move down. My face is right next to her panties. There is a wet spot with an immense amount of heat coming out, almost making my face sweat. I can smell her through the panties. It is a clean and mild smell. It tasted so sweet. I kissed her along her panty line, slowly pulling them down as I kiss ever lower.
I get to her pubic hair. Bright red in a small tuff with most of the area waxed. She must have gotten it down on the way home from the airport. She was more than expecting this. I bite her inner thigh, giving her a hickey. She screamed with pleaser and her legs convulsed. At this point the pheromones are making me feel primal. I rip off her panties and go straight for her vagina.
She is very wet. I start by licking straight from the vaginal opening up to the top of the clitoris, lifting the hood with my upper lip as I go up. Her vulva lips separate. They are now standing open in the most inviting manner. I suck each lip individually. She is quiet now, but shaking. There is an occasional moan, she is too into it. Before pleasuring the clit, I lick the opening, slowing putting my tongue further and further in until the length of my tongue is maxed. My tongue pulsing in her body is making her convulse amost violently, she lets out screams of pleasure. I lick the lips again and grip my arms around her legs. She will need to be restrained for this.
I lift up her clitoral hood with my tongue. Her clit in engorged. I lick it up and down slowly at first. I eventually get into a rhythm with her shaking, we go on for what seemed like seconds to me, but lasted nearly three quarters of an hour.
She had two orgasms, but still wants more. I get back up on the bed and she lunges at me, pushing me down, and going straight for my dick. She licks her lips, the tip, then goes straight down, getting right to the base in one go. Her tongue is positioned around the tip, moving completely independently of the rest of her mouth. Within seconds I feel like I could cum, I have never had a blowjob this amazing. I have to hold back for as long as I can, as we haven’t gotten to the main attraction.
I pull back, and she lies backwards. There is no doubt that now is the time. I pull her legs back farther, and position my crotch next to hers. I rub my penis along her vagina, once again separating the lips. Within seconds it is dripping wet, her vagina even more so. Just this rubbing is incredible.
I make the plunge. She is incredibly warm, hot would be a better word. The wetness and heat instantly start to fog up the windows. She is so tight it takes multiple pushes to get my penis in, but once I do I push it in all the way, barely flicking against her cervix. Her legs tighten around me and she starts to grind. The pulsing is incredible, I can feel her tightening her vaginal muscles. I couldn’t pull away if I wanted to.
I turn her around so she is on her hands and knees and fuck her from behind. She is dripping with wetness. I am able to push even farther into her. Noelle’s knees shake. She can barely stay in this position. I lean back to give her a break but she jumps right back on board. I am laying on my back. She is facing the opposite direction while sitting on my dick giving a better range of motion. She sits up so the tip is barely inside her and plunges back in. She goes faster and faster until I cannot take it anymore. I shake, I grip the sheets, I moan louder than I ever had before. She get off, and sticks my cock deep into her throat.
About a minute after sucking, I cum. For about 15 seconds I was ejaculating into her mouth. She clearly loved this. She keeps it in her mouth, sucking the semen out until I was once again flaccid.
We were sweaty and exhausted. She sits up on top of me. Her vagina is now touching my penis. She smiles, and says “When is round two?”.
I smile and throw her on the bed…
Ive only read a couple of stories of this type ever, so if it is bad, please bear with me.
I call it "Noelle" It is a simple story about straight sex between a young couple who havent seen each other in weeks.
without further ado...
It has been weeks since I have seen her. Experienced her smell, her feel.
Her mother was in the hospital for months, not only taking all her time, but destroying her sex drive. Her mother made a miraculous recovery. Only seconds from now that door will open the bathroom door and I will be able to sleep next to Noelle for the first time in who knows how long.
I lay in bed, nude. A thin sheet covers my body, thin and full of static, the blanket sticks to my skin, giving a revealing look of my body even when covered. I was semi-hard, on my way to complete. Just the thought of the heat coming from her body as she lies next to me makes me shiver. I brush my hand near my penis, it is firm and more than ready.
Her time away has done wonders to her. When Noelle wasn’t visiting her mother she was at her house helping with the months of backed up chores. I can tell. Her body has never been this toned and tight. This is quite a feat. Her body is tighter than the most well developed college girl I have seen.
Just then the bathroom door opens. There is Noelle standing there in a thin, sexy gown. Her red curly hair falls slightly below her breasts, concealing the nipple peeking through the sheer cloth. Her green eyes, though barely visible in the candle light, still brightly burn in my brain. She smells of perfume, her legs smoothly waxed, skin barely tanned. She knows how I burn for her. She gives me a sexy smirk. I cannot take it anymore. I stand up, lunge over, and take her into my arms.
Our lips instantly lock. My hands go around her waist and make their way up to her hair. Her cool, slightly damp hair turns steamy quickly as I supper her head and kiss her with more passion. She lightly flicks my lip with her tongue before moving in further. Her breath tastes sweet. Never have I felt a mouth so soft. The combination of her supple tongue and sweet saliva makes me feel like my entire mouth is melting. Something I have rarely felt before.
I pull away and she lies back on the bed. The low cut gown falls to the side, exposing the freckles on her shoulder. She moves, lets out a silent moan, and the gown slips off over her breast. Her nipple is exposed. Bright pink, perfectly round. The air is cool in the bedroom. While her nipple is small, it is as firm and erect as I have ever seen it.
I lean over her, immediately kissing her neck. Her moans are audible now, her hot breath hits my neck. My penis enlarges even more, rubbing up against her inner thigh. Her legs tightly wrap around me.
I move up, kissing her behind her ear, eventually giving her ear lobe a bite. I lean up a little bit. Her legs still clutched around me. I unbutton the one button actually buttoned on the front of her gown, exposing both breasts. I pull off the gown, leaving her only in her light pink panties. Simple but enormously sexy.
I begin kissing her neck again, but quickly move down to her chest and eventually to her nipple. I flick her nipple with my tongue and proceed to lightly suck. She is getting short of breath; I can feel the heat coming off of her vagina through her panties. Gripping her left breast in my head, I rub her nipple, making it even more erect.
I pull up, Noelle releases her leg’s grip off of my body. I lean over, this time my face over her belly button. I kiss it, and slowly move down. My face is right next to her panties. There is a wet spot with an immense amount of heat coming out, almost making my face sweat. I can smell her through the panties. It is a clean and mild smell. It tasted so sweet. I kissed her along her panty line, slowly pulling them down as I kiss ever lower.
I get to her pubic hair. Bright red in a small tuff with most of the area waxed. She must have gotten it down on the way home from the airport. She was more than expecting this. I bite her inner thigh, giving her a hickey. She screamed with pleaser and her legs convulsed. At this point the pheromones are making me feel primal. I rip off her panties and go straight for her vagina.
She is very wet. I start by licking straight from the vaginal opening up to the top of the clitoris, lifting the hood with my upper lip as I go up. Her vulva lips separate. They are now standing open in the most inviting manner. I suck each lip individually. She is quiet now, but shaking. There is an occasional moan, she is too into it. Before pleasuring the clit, I lick the opening, slowing putting my tongue further and further in until the length of my tongue is maxed. My tongue pulsing in her body is making her convulse amost violently, she lets out screams of pleasure. I lick the lips again and grip my arms around her legs. She will need to be restrained for this.
I lift up her clitoral hood with my tongue. Her clit in engorged. I lick it up and down slowly at first. I eventually get into a rhythm with her shaking, we go on for what seemed like seconds to me, but lasted nearly three quarters of an hour.
She had two orgasms, but still wants more. I get back up on the bed and she lunges at me, pushing me down, and going straight for my dick. She licks her lips, the tip, then goes straight down, getting right to the base in one go. Her tongue is positioned around the tip, moving completely independently of the rest of her mouth. Within seconds I feel like I could cum, I have never had a blowjob this amazing. I have to hold back for as long as I can, as we haven’t gotten to the main attraction.
I pull back, and she lies backwards. There is no doubt that now is the time. I pull her legs back farther, and position my crotch next to hers. I rub my penis along her vagina, once again separating the lips. Within seconds it is dripping wet, her vagina even more so. Just this rubbing is incredible.
I make the plunge. She is incredibly warm, hot would be a better word. The wetness and heat instantly start to fog up the windows. She is so tight it takes multiple pushes to get my penis in, but once I do I push it in all the way, barely flicking against her cervix. Her legs tighten around me and she starts to grind. The pulsing is incredible, I can feel her tightening her vaginal muscles. I couldn’t pull away if I wanted to.
I turn her around so she is on her hands and knees and fuck her from behind. She is dripping with wetness. I am able to push even farther into her. Noelle’s knees shake. She can barely stay in this position. I lean back to give her a break but she jumps right back on board. I am laying on my back. She is facing the opposite direction while sitting on my dick giving a better range of motion. She sits up so the tip is barely inside her and plunges back in. She goes faster and faster until I cannot take it anymore. I shake, I grip the sheets, I moan louder than I ever had before. She get off, and sticks my cock deep into her throat.
About a minute after sucking, I cum. For about 15 seconds I was ejaculating into her mouth. She clearly loved this. She keeps it in her mouth, sucking the semen out until I was once again flaccid.
We were sweaty and exhausted. She sits up on top of me. Her vagina is now touching my penis. She smiles, and says “When is round two?”.
I smile and throw her on the bed…
You do an excellent job of making clear how long he's waited to be with her. The details of her life that you weave in the story are part of the building narrative, and make clear how closely involved they are. 
