First attempt posted. Feedback appreciated

Re: Rooming with Hannah

I liked it very much. Nicely written, gramatically correct (always a good sign :) )
Not a stroke off, like you said, but all the better for it, in my opinion.
Looking forward to the rest of the tale.

Jet
 
Thanks, Jet, Very nice of you to say so. I had a great editor, and she really made a tremendous difference, I think. I'm about halfway through the next section now and I think it's going rather well. I felt kind of wierd, though, writing about a real person; I kept thinking she might read it and write me an unkind note or something. Should take me a week or so to wrap up the next bit. Hope you continue to enjoy.

Alexander
 
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