First attempt at writing - seeking help

[DirtyLaura]

Hi,

Its my first time writing erotica, I slung together parts of my own fantasies in writing just for myself . Recently I gave it a shape of a story. Please help me put it in a readable format. Any advice would be welcome.

Thanks
Laura

 

[sr71plt]

You are more likely to generate interest if you give the genre and number of words. Also, you have your PMs (private messages) turned on, don't you? Most response will come directly via PM.

 

[malefica]

Genre-depending, I would be happy to look it over if you want to sling me a PM.

 

[sexnovella]

Dear Laura!

PM sent.

 

[DirtyLaura]

Thanks

For the offers for help, I am checking the PMs and responding. The content is ;

Pages 26
Words 6566
Characters 35224
Characters excluding spaces 28769

Its an interracial/cheating wife piece in third person narrative (trying to get into the writer lingo).