First Attempt at Poetry

[SilentLady]

This is my very first attempt at erotic poetry and I would appreciate some feedback. .

Any and all help would be appreciated.

Ecstasy

 

[_Land]

This is my very first attempt at erotic poetry and I would appreciate some feedback. .

Any and all help would be appreciated.

Ecstasy

PSSSSSST.......You already have some attention on the board
look here http://www.literotica.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&postid=2626573#post2626573


Great poem, needs some spell checking, a little punctuation..................But You had me from Hello

 

[SilentLady]

Great poem, needs some spell checking, a little punctuation..................But You had me from Hello


Thanks ever so _Land I will go back and check it all out. .