Finding Your Themes

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Finding Your Themes
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Writing fiction is about telling stories . . . but what is telling stories about? When you tell someone a story, why are you doing this? What compels you to create lies that have about them the ring of truth; what drives you to invent people and places and events and create a context that pulls them all together and makes them seem real?

When you're creating fiction, at heart you are searching for ways to create order in the universe. You are digging into your core beliefs on how the world works, and running imaginary people through a trial universe built on these beliefs to see how both the people and the beliefs stand up under pressure. People who write fiction tend not to accept the world at face value -- in general, they are the people who always got in trouble when they were little for asking "Why?" one time too many about something that, to everyone else, seemed pretty obvious.

When you started writing fiction, you probably did so at about the same time that you discovered that not only did your parents not have all the answers to the universe, but neither did anybody else. You discovered that, if you wanted an answer to that still-nagging "Why?" you were going to have to find the answer yourself.

Writing fiction is the act of questioning the silent, unanswering infinite and demanding that the infinite cough up a reply . . . and hurry up about it, too. It is the ultimate defiance of that stock parental response, "Because I said so." Writing fiction is standing on the edge of the abyss of ignorance, looking across at the cliffs on the other side, and saying, "With nothing but words, I am going to build myself a bridge that takes me from here to there . . . and when I'm done, other people will be able to cross over that same bridge." It's an act of ultimate hubris, but of ultimate courage, too, because the abyss can eat you, and will if you slip.

So which bridges are worth building? You can't cover the whole abyss. You can run a thousand lines from one side to the other if you live long enough, and you won't even cast a shadow on the voracious ignorance that lies beneath. All you can do is span the darkness with your slender threads, and build them strong enough that people can traverse them, and make them interesting enough that people will take the risk.

Which bridges are worth risking life and limb and hope and soul to create? Only those that take you to someplace you have not yet been.

And how do you decide which bridges those might be? You ask yourself the following question: To what questions in life have I not yet found a satisfactory answer?

These are some of my answers to that question:

Why do good things happen to bad people? Have you figured that one out yet? I haven't. Why do bad things happen to good people? I've struggled with that one through a couple of books, and I have a couple of angles on it now, but certainly not the definitive one.

Why do we get old and die? Would living in these bodies forever be better? I've run with that one a couple of times now, too.

Why do we fall in love? Why do we fall out of love? Why do we hunger for the place that is just beyond the next horizon? What is evil, and why do some people choose evil? What is good, and why do some people choose good? How are the first group of people different from the second group? How are they the same?

Is there a God, and if there is, does he or she know I'm here? And if he or she does . . . what is going on with my life?

Is there a heaven? Is there a hell? Is there anything that lies beyond the realm of this moment, this breath, this place and time? Do we have souls, and if so, what does that mean? Do we have a purpose for being here? What do we mean to each other? What constitutes living a meaningful life? What is love, and why does it matter?

These have all been my themes. Perhaps they are the same questions you have wondered about. Perhaps your curiosity and doubt run in completely different directions. In either case, your themes will define the power of your work, and its meaning not only to you but to everyone who reads it.

If you choose to work with safe themes -- with questions to which you already know the answer -- you'll write safe books. You can have a very successful career writing safe books; after all, you won't drive too hard into the core of anyone's comfort zone, you won't force your readers to question the meaning of their own lives, you won't upset yourself or anyone else by reaching conclusions you don't like or find frightening.

But you won't grow as a writer, either, and you'll risk becoming bored with your characters and your stories and your work.

You can have a successful career writing about the questions you haven't answered, too. Mark Twain, my favorite writer, is also my favorite example of a man whose themes challenged the pat answers and asked the scary questions. He was a marvelous entertainer and a brilliant raconteur . . . but he also dared to look even God in the eye and say, "This doesn't make sense to me. Explain yourself."

In books and short stories and articles and essays and letters, again and again he held a mirror up to the world of his day and said, "Your actions belie your words, people. Your beliefs don't fit the facts. And your hypocrisy shames you . . . you deserve better of yourselves than to act the way you do." He wrote with everything he had. He dared the tough themes. And now, long after his death, when his colleagues who chose to write safely are nothing but footnotes in unread texts, Mark Twain continues to talk to us. His bridges across the abyss are still strong, still in use, still vital to those who want and need to get to the places he explored.

Every writer has something to say, but those writers whose works endure have dared to say something about the things that frighten them, confuse them, challenge them, and occasionally delight them. They have not gone across the bridges built by others. They have dared to build their own.

You can find your own themes, and add power and depth to your work by daring to explore them through fiction. You can leave a worthwhile series of bridges into unknown territory, a solid series of roads away from ignorance and into knowledge that your readers can continue to use long after you are dust. In a world that cannot offer you physical immortality, you can leave something of your spirit, your courage, your hope and your integrity behind.

Find your themes -- your REAL themes -- and write them. I dare you.
 
Backwards?

Well, I don't know about you Dr. M...or Holly for that matter, but I seem to write stories backward. I start writing the story and let the Theme find me rather than seeking out the theme first. And so far, I've never yet been disappointed in whatever theme came to light in a story, nor did I ever feel that the theme that came to light was "safe" or undemanding.

Stories are often used by us to work out these questions, yes, but often we don't know which question the story is best suited to work out. For me, at least, it takes till I've reached the middle to realize what theme this story, in particular, is trying to explore and work out.

I suspect, as well, that anyone on the AH has already surpassed Ms. Lisle's dare. Few forums have people who ask so many demanding questions--or who rarely take the answers given for granted. Whether they look for the theme or it looks for them, I'd guess that most of the writers here are already way ahead of the game when it comes to using big, demanding questions to write better stories ;)
 
I'm not sure what my themes are. I know I write a lot about power, its use and misuse. As well as how important we are to one another.

I suppose theme in my works is a lot like subtext in my works. I leave it for other people to find. ;)
 
I find the question I try to answer in my work is;

"Will there be sex?

Will there be more sex?" :devil:
 
Stella_Omega said:
I find the question I try to answer in my work is;

"Will there be sex?

Will there be more sex?" :devil:


At least you have a consistent theme...
 
I always enjoy trying to insert at least some little theme in my writing. I like the idea of coming 'full circle' regarding some little idea within the story. Such as, when a character meets his lover at a coffee shop, and she introduces him to some new drink he'd never had . . . and then, at the end of the story, after she's gone, he goes back to that same coffee shop and orders the same drink.

I'm not sure if I include larger themes in some of my Lit stories. It may happen by coincidence, but i don't do it on purpose. In my sci-fi stories, I did consciously start with a basic theme, as well as plot. I think it is necessary in science fiction, since that genre deals with metaphor more than most others.
 
Most of my serious stories have the theme of "the universe is basically meaningless", which explains why I've never sold anything.
 
I make shit up and type shit down.

If I start dressing the deed in fancier words than that (universe/abyss/infinite woah nelly slow down), I'll just get stage fright.
 
The_Fool said:
hubris....I like it. :nana:
:D Well, hubris works very well for erotica, now doesn't it? Oedipus Rex, the drama used to explain hubris to most literature students, if written for this site, would have a very different ending. Oedipus wouldn't put out his eyes, or feel any shame or guilt; to the contrary, he'd retain his hubris, be pleased as punch that he did away with his awful Dad, and delighted to have such a hot mom as a lover.

It'd be in the incest category, rated "H" and readers would leave comments like: "Hot!" and "Needs more sex!"

No downfall from hubris here ;)
 
Hi Doc,

This piece by Holly Lisle reminds me of the book "Story" by Robert McKee. She uses different terms, but many similar concepts are there.

One of my favourite quotes from McKee is "A screenplay is not an accident," and I think this can also extend to "A novel or short story is not an accident," although many people (and I especially pick on sex writers) may beg to differ.

Obviously, what a story is differs from her query, "what is telling stories about', but I find her article intriguing. I'd agree with McKee (and always have even before reading his book) that a story is about writing a metaphor for life and in this way I agree with Sub Joe's rather brilliant sentiment that 'the universe is basically meaningless', which explains why I've never sold anything." (seriously SJ - brilliant! lol)

I do have one qualm with Lisle, though. She suggests (title thru body) that theme is a question. Certainly, I agree that questions must be asked, but isn't theme an answer? (I ask - lol).

Interesting article, Doc. :kiss:
 
Interesting article Doc, thanks.

My first reaction is, "Barf. Achoo!" Which happens to me when I read stuff that's too artsy fartsy flowery. But that's just me.

And I guess she means asking questions leads to themes. I do think the underlying message is good.

On the other hand, forget themes, I'm just trying to learn how to write story that doesn't get back clicked too often.
 
3113 said:
:D Well, hubris works very well for erotica, now doesn't it? Oedipus Rex, the drama used to explain hubris to most literature students, if written for this site, would have a very different ending. Oedipus wouldn't put out his eyes, or feel any shame or guilt; to the contrary, he'd retain his hubris, be pleased as punch that he did away with his awful Dad, and delighted to have such a hot mom as a lover.

It'd be in the incest category, rated "H" and readers would leave comments like: "Hot!" and "Needs more sex!"

No downfall from hubris here ;)
We could fix a lot of tragedies, too!

Roxanne, Cyrano and Christian would have found themselves in a blissful menage a'trois, getting laid three ways from sunday...

The ending of that book always pissed me off, There was no bloody reason for it.
 
I've discovered a Art features large in my writing. Not always intentionally, probably as a consequence of a world I have knowledge about. I'm finishing the edit of novel set around Byzantine Icons, this following a novel about a classical dancer, a third (to be finished) as the bizarre life of an artist, and I'm planning a new work about a female artist who discovers all her paintings have been purchased by a single person. Can't get away from it. :rolleyes:
 
Stella_Omega said:
Roxanne, Cyrano and Christian would have found themselves in a blissful menage a'trois, getting laid three ways from sunday...

The ending of that book always pissed me off, There was no bloody reason for it.
Oh, baby, yeah! You know that's what they really all wanted :devil:

I always thought the ending to that book ridiculous as well. But that's what you tend to get with a lot of French novels, suffering for suffering's sake :rolleyes: I love the Count of Monte Cristo but I always gag at the point where he withholds info on Valentine's death from her heroic, suicidal lover so that the guy can really learn to appreciate life :p

Wouldn't it be easier to visit some nice lady with a whip for that kind of thing?
 
3113 said:
Wouldn't it be easier to visit some nice lady with a whip for that kind of thing?

That's so horribly mundane. Mental pain is so exquisitely superior to physical. :devil:
 
jomar said:
My first reaction is, "Barf. Achoo!" Which happens to me when I read stuff that's too artsy fartsy flowery. But that's just me.

I do the same when reading writing with no story. :)
 
"Writing fiction is the act of questioning the silent, unanswering infinite and demanding that the infinite cough up a reply . . . and hurry up about it, too. It is the ultimate defiance of that stock parental response, "Because I said so." Writing fiction is standing on the edge of the abyss of ignorance, looking across at the cliffs on the other side, and saying, "With nothing but words, I am going to build myself a bridge that takes me from here to there . . . and when I'm done, other people will be able to cross over that same bridge." It's an act of ultimate hubris, but of ultimate courage, too, because the abyss can eat you, and will if you slip."

I recognized myself in that. I know that I made it across the abyss of my younger years and one of the reasons I write is the hope that I can help kids across as well.

Thanks for sharing that. :rose:
 
CharleyH said:
I do the same when reading writing with no story. :)
The problem with reading writing with no story is that you can read a helluva lot of a non-story dressed in prose until it slowly dawns on you that "hey, this dude has nothing whatsoever to say".

And that's royally anoying. :cool:
 
CharleyH said:
"A novel or short story is not an accident," although many people (and I especially pick on sex writers) may beg to differ.

I'd have to say my current in-progress novel quite closely resembles a train wreck in many ways. Does that make it an accident or just an unfortunate set of circumstances?
 
What I'm usually thinking is "Please, please, please let me find all the spelling and grammar mistakes before someone else does". Is that a theme?
 
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