finals

[My Erotic Tale]

Okay, tomorrow morning
I 'must' send off the POEM
for this contest. Here are
the ones I wrote and narrowed
down to sending, now I need
to make the decision on which
one to send. I have my favorite
but other eyes may see what I
do not <grin>

the theme:
perfect valentines????

which do you like,
or any last minute suggestions ...


thanks
Art~

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poem #1
(untitled: any suggestions?)

Love is the element that bonds us to each other
we have one day anually to express this to our lover
love blossoms or dies every single day.
since the first day of time, this pattern was lay.

Each year is different than the one before
this is my topic that to you I implore
For this year is different than any other
we are at war sending our sisters and brothers

Love is why they fight for their home and country
putting their life on the line for you and me
this is a love that is so very very strong
it is for them I sing a Valentine Song

I hope no lives are lost when the lovers day chimes
for they should all be concidered, on Valentines

(My Hat's off and heart open for our soldiers)

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poem #2
perfect valentines

Trumpets blared
for Love
so many times

But none
are as special
as our own Valentine

You see two lovers
and a smile
will soon rise

but there is nothing
like the look
from a lover's eyes

When the day comes
and it is
Valentine days time

I hope that everyone
is with their
perfect Valentines!

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poem #3
Front Porch Love

An empty heart cries
for their Valentine
laid to rest
during war time

and when the day of lovers
spring forth
there will be tears
on their front porch

there is nothing stronger
than a true love
or sadder than sending
their love up above

so when you ask
what's the perfect valentines?
it would be our soldiers
giving their life or their time

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poem #4
Love's battles on hold

Love can be the feeling
of someone ripping open your chest
rearranging your heart
and make life a confussing mess

Love can be a tornado
of flooding emotions
and a tidal wave of passion
and mixed with frustration

Love can turn you upside down
stretch your patience
push your buttons
and torment your soul

Is there anything more dear
than two hearts so near
To touch anothers soul
and share in the after glow

Love is the pleasure
that you so delicately hold
the strong feelings you have
for another soul

Love is overwelming
and takes a hold
hoping and wishing
won't make it grow

Love battles problems
almost everyday
but lay them to rest
on Valentines Day

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poem #5
my favorite valentine

From Adam and Eve love sprout from seed
so many have searched to fill love's need

How many shared the joys and blessings
that come from love with shared feelings

How many broken hearts lay abreast
in the earth's bed for eternal slumber

Did each beating heart feel love's nest
generations of an eternal number

How many loved a one sided love
where their passion had no reflection

Their soul burned for the touch of
another mirroring this infatuation

I can account for only one in time
My Only Love, My Favorite Valentine

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

(yes number 5 may look familiar but I
thought it might fit as well <grin>)

okay, what do you think, please post
after you have quit laughing hehehey!

(*_*) Art~

 

[Du Lac]

Damn Art.. you are productive lol..

Hey !!! too many good ones to choice from each one I read I loved.. I hate to make a decision.. oh me oh my.. can it be a tie???
4 and 5
Good work Art..
Du~

 

[My Erotic Tale]

Re: Damn Art.. you are productive lol..

Hey !!! too many good ones to choice from each one I read I loved.. I hate to make a decision.. oh me oh my.. can it be a tie???
4 and 5
Good work Art..
Du~

4 or 5 okay ...so far

4 = 1
and
5 = 1

<grin>

Thanks Du~

You see 'our' story posted "Dance of a Kiss" <grin>
thanks Du Lac ~

 

[My Erotic Tale]

got an Anon vote of
4 and 5 also

so
4 = 2

and

5 = 2


hummm!
I see a pattern here!

 

[My Erotic Tale]

Re: Damn Art.. you are productive lol..

Hey !!! too many good ones to choice from each one I read I loved.. I hate to make a decision.. oh me oh my.. can it be a tie???
4 and 5
Good work Art..
Du~

Productive?

My mind spins pretty darn good somedays
the poems come out faster than I type
which ain't hard since my 'hen' peckin'
is pretty darn slow! <grin>

but my body loves computer time it can sit
and do nothing my mind does all the work
my fingers just can't keep up <grin>

thanks again Du~
thanks BAMA!

 

[My Erotic Tale]

got an Anon vote of
4 and 5 also

so
4 = 2

and

5 = 2


hummm!
I see a pattern here!

okay Bambi picks 5

now it's
#4 = 2

#5 = 3

 

[seranade]

#1

Hey arturo

I liked your new story, and I like all these poems. I think I would have to pick number one and number 5. I have a new one coming out so watch for it, okay.

alby-checking it out

 

[My Erotic Tale]

okay so poem #1 gets one from seranade

#1 = 1
#4 = 2
#5 = 3

 

[Guest]

Poem number 5!!!!!!!

 

[sack]

probably 4 or 5....

not bad, for a "lesser" poet! (kidding, kidding!)


Sack

 

[My Erotic Tale]

Poem number 5!!!!!!!

thanks saldne

another for #5
I see where this is going <grin>

#1 = 1
#4 = 2
#5 = 4

 

[Du Lac]

Re: Re: Damn Art.. you are productive lol..

4 or 5 okay ...so far

4 = 1
and
5 = 1

<grin>

Thanks Du~

You see 'our' story posted "Dance of a Kiss" <grin>
thanks Du Lac ~

blushing Art.. I did nothing it is your creativity and romantic side that makes that story flow.. and flow it does babe.. all I did was make sure you spelt some things correctly.... lol... and I took way too long to help you... ty so much for the sweet... note.. I got all du-ey lol... but I humbly bow to the erotic master.. .. I love your work babe... keep writing... and where the hell is my friend Sack? lol...
wet and wild with the Du~

 

[My Erotic Tale]

Re: Re: Re: Damn Art.. you are productive lol..

blushing Art.. I did nothing it is your creativity and romantic side that makes that story flow.. and flow it does babe.. all I did was make sure you spelt some things correctly.... lol... and I took way too long to help you... ty so much for the sweet... note.. I got all du-ey lol... but I humbly bow to the erotic master.. .. I love your work babe... keep writing... and where the hell is my friend Sack? lol...
wet and wild with the Du~

probably over at the RAINBOW POETS SOCIETY
pluggin' jim <lmao>

 

[Du Lac]

Re: Re: Re: Re: Damn Art.. you are productive lol..

probably over at the RAINBOW POETS SOCIETY
pluggin' jim <lmao>

LMAO.. so bad you are Art... hehehehe.. Du!~

 

[My Erotic Tale]

okay scratch the above grrrrr
sent it in and found out it had to be
50 words or less, damn,

so I wrote this at work while being
shot at, I am so happy to be alive I could hug
......even sack (richard simmons on viagra)
(yeah I know I am being called Mr. Miyagi on saki!)
<grin>
really I feel blessed,
law enforcement has it's moments people>>>
I am here and I am humble tonight. so if you want
to throw it at me, tonight would be a night I embrace
anything! <grin>

okay the new poem...
theme perfect valentine
50 words or less prose or other wise


A perfect world?
perhaps!
A perfect day?
I have seen a few
A perfect love?
Maybe~

and the nights
holding you
are perfectly wonderfull
and heavenly too!

and for love
in a day
on this world
to be perfect?

would be ...
Valentines Day
with you!


what do you think?
It goes next day mail tomorrow!

 

[Du Lac]

so I wrote this at work while being
shot at, I am so happy to be alive I could hug
......even sack (richard simmons on viagra)
(yeah I know I am being called Mr. Miyagi on saki!)[/B]

OMG Art... I am laughing so hard right now.. oh no... sorry had to run to the bathroom and change my pants ha!.... Mr. Miyagi on sake omg.. so f'ing funny! I thought he was hot sober.. but what a wild ride that would be!!!! bonsai clippings flying... twisting turning.. omg... I can think of so many wonderful traits of being Mr. Mayagi on sake... what a compliment!!!! you two men.... lol... what to do with you... hmmmm....sure the old du can think of something... but the dueling minds are a hoot... I can only pray it is in... good gest.... omg..Mr. Miyagi on sake.. you should be in my mind right now... lol.. maybe not!

Anyway back to the poem.. sweet Art.. I liked it... it held an age of innocence to it.. brought me back to that first love era... omg.. can I still remember that far back????? Yes I can... lol... the grays are really not there...really.. as she stares in the mirror perplexed at the woman who stares back at her..... lol... yes I am whacked tonight lol... goofy... but that is life... and how your poem made me feel.. young and goofy... I like it...
nice write babe..
Du~

 

[sack]

I find this to be really offensive..

probably over at the RAINBOW POETS SOCIETY
pluggin' jim <lmao>


__________________
Art~
My Erotic Tales

It's kind of sad when people have nothing to say and decide to take pot shots at someone's sexuality. I do not know Jim that well, a PM or two but that's it. He has supported my work...is that what bothers you?


Sack

 

[My Erotic Tale]

Re: I find this to be really offensive..

probably over at the RAINBOW POETS SOCIETY
pluggin' jim <lmao>


__________________
Art~
My Erotic Tales

It's kind of sad when people have nothing to say and decide to take pot shots at someone's sexuality. I do not know Jim that well, a PM or two but that's it. He has supported my work...is that what bothers you?


Sack

I believe that statement was said to some one
other than you ...not at you!

I have no problem with jim supporting your work
at all, jim and I go way back before you, his voting
standards weren't (in my book) honorable, and
a couple other issues he had last year <grin>

He is the zen master of pen and I learn
from my enemies. <grin> or "less" favorable
aquaintanences <<<<laughing> jim has taught
me alot, it's just hard to hear him with his nose
in the air.

I don't see it as a pot shot as in me talking to you
She asked where's sack , I gave my best estimate.

now if your here, on my thread, reading some one
elses words and don't like it, sorry. and....

I have a motto, to live and let live, I except jim
(and his probs) I wouldn't want to be him. I feel
for him, as for you I have left you alone, you asked
me not to comment on your stuff so I don't but yet
you comment on mine...??? whats with that? not
that I care most have actually been good comments
lets face it sack you are the comment KING or queen
I don't have a problem with you or your feedback/
comments, we do tend to rub each other like
sandpaper though. I do not take to pompus
or "Greater Than" mentalities. You wouldn't last
a day in my boots lil buddy ...

I had or have a feedback from anon ???
that says I should not make matters worse
for it is silly to watch Mr. Myagi on sake spat
with richard simons on viagra while Mrs. Doubtfire
takes his don qui and flips through the dictionary
to make his posts. now when I got this my fiirst
thought don't count <grin> but I learned that
this shit has to stop or this little fire of anger
would grow into a bonfire so I walked away and
let ya'll be ya'll and your still not happy ....

what would you have me do to make your little
happy ass feel better?

 

[Du Lac]

Okay you two...

I guess I rekindled this fire unbewittenly (hell did I spell that right?) .... Sorry to open a sore wound... but enough is enough.. I tried like hell to make lite of the name changes etc... damn men! Good thing I love them so ha! here is my post on the Public comment dilemma...

Quote:
I am sorry all.. but this thread to me looks and feels like alot of people with writers block or plain old nothing in life to bitch about....lol.. that said...
why can we not just comment on each others work.. we all have our style.. mine is different than others and others are different than mine....

Hell... I am not so egotistical and Queenly that I demand all to love me... (just a few lol..) or what I write... how false is that when... I don't like other people sometimes.. or what they write... that is life.. we can comment.. in a kindly fashion... without brutality.

And the ones that say hey Du Lac .... you suck... lol.. I smile widely.. and reply..."Why thankyou! I have worked long and hard... to become a master at that sucking technique..... lol... so happy you see one of my gifts!"

HA! My own work varies.. sometimes simple sometimes very very mind twisting.. it is me... do I expect everyone to understand it? NO! And thank God they don't! How boring would that be?

So dear ones... commenting is important... do it with grace and dignity of self respect... those who are Vulgar hold no self respect there fore.... I smile and say.. "oh poor soul... you don't know how to suck!" I then giggle and wish them GREAT SEX... 1.}so they learn to suck.. and 2.} because what comes around goes around.... hmmm a tad bit selfish but hey...
I love to suck HA!
have a good day
Du~


Now.. I suggest as Art said that Lit is a big big world here... we all go to our corners.. and write some sucky poetry!(so when we look at our good stuff.. we will think OMG.. brillant lol) !!! Remember just what in life that is important... Love, laughter, honor, respect and diversity. Let others be..for life would be so boring with one perspective. No more fighting, no more name calling... respect life and living. I know Art has tried to stay away from the bonfire... I kindled the fire and that I am sorry for... now go to your corners and live and let live... be happy, whole and well...
Love you both..one more thing to add..

He who forgives ends the quarrel.

-African proverb
Du~
(PS.. that was mild boys.. do not make me give you both a spanking... too much for this Du to take lol....)