sweet_lusciousdesire
Literotica Guru
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I just started reading this series and found a couple of good ideas I think would make for a better story next time I write one. The author seems to include surprise, and mystery with unanswered questions to entice the reader to read on. I also like the flow of the story.
What techniques do you think the author uses to create such an interesting read?
What techniques do you think the author uses to create such an interesting read?