Fib Divine

[HotKittySpank]

0, 1, 1, 2, 3, 5, 8, 13, ... hmmm, so based on this lovely logic:


I
Try
Failing
Horrendous,
Refusing to quit
These numbers will bow before me
I will be the master of my own divinity


supposed to end with 20 syllables but I figure it could go on and on forever ; )
I hope I counted right!

 

[HotKittySpank]

Math;
Such
Nonsense
To my mind, at last
A good way to play with numbers
Even I could not possibly blunder with my Fib
: )

 

[Seduceros2]

(0, 1, 1, 2, 3, 5, 8, 13 . . .hmm)

Goose
down
blanket
is too hot
this far past kissing.
Might as well throw it off of us,
to slide the ropes under the mattress and tighten them.


-----------
Howzat?

 

[HotKittySpank]

(0, 1, 1, 2, 3, 5, 8, 13 . . .hmm)

Goose
down
blanket
is too hot
this far past kissing.
Might as well throw it off of us,
to slide the ropes under the mattress and tighten them.


-----------
Howzat?

naughty - naughty - that's how

thanks for adding to this thread... : )

 

[HotKittySpank]

hang
time;
moments
silent struck
gravitational
insecurity considers
flight, exploiting splits seemingly seamless around us

 

[sethp]

hmmm

0, 1, 1, 2, 3, 5, 8, 13, 21

0-" "
1-full
1-lips
2-sucking
3-worshiping
5-loving and drinking
8-my seed till she gags a little bit
13-but she smiles as she looks into my eyes and my warm seed
21-is spilling out from her full lips, down her perfect chin to her massive, swealling full breasts

 

[My Erotic Trail]

0, 1, 1, 2, 3, 5, 8, 13, ... hmmm, so based on this lovely logic:


I
Try
Failing
Horrendous,
Refusing to quit
These numbers will bow before me
I will be the master of my own divinity


supposed to end with 20 syllables but I figure it could go on and on forever ; )
I hope I counted right!

my
I
do not
understand
oh how you do it
and make it look so very easy
mine however, was not that good! but was fun.

(~_~)

 

[Liar]

---------------
.
"One",
"one",
and "two",
"three" is due,
then "five" hits the spot.
How many to "eight" have I got?
Will "thirteen" betray that my syllable count is shit?
Or will it end at "twenty one" when this line is said and done and I run out of wit?
---------------

 

[Seduceros2]

0, 1, 1, 2, 3, 5, 8, 13,

They
are
fractal,
the words I inject
infect and explode virally,
bathing me in trembling, sweaty polysemous desire.

 

[wildsweetone]

sorry

 

[HotKittySpank]

oh,
poor
Pluto
voted off
our bright oasis
set to drift through icy darkness, eliminated


(Can I just say how excited I am that ya'll are actually trying this? Well, I'll just say it anyway... yipeeeeeeee! - : )

Dude! What is the deal with that crap about Pluto? And what of Sedna? (now given some other not as cool name) She is surely a brutal icy beaut. as well - Can we not come up with a new classification for 'lesser' planets and not lose what little we have circling with us? Are we not on a planet that is smaller than other's moons as well? Uh! grumble, grumble...

ok - stepping off the box now....

 

[cherries_on_snow]

O
grace
love
beauty
all of the
columns like siblings
holding up holy canopies
Doric, Ionic, Corinthian and Egyptian
not to mention the esques, the revivals. Point is it takes many to make a temple.

 

[My Erotic Trail]

oh,
poor
Pluto
voted off
our bright oasis
set to drift through icy darkness, eliminated


(Can I just say how excited I am that ya'll are actually trying this? Well, I'll just say it anyway... yipeeeeeeee! - : )

Dude! What is the deal with that crap about Pluto? And what of Sedna? (now given some other not as cool name) She is surely a brutal icy beaut. as well - Can we not come up with a new classification for 'lesser' planets and not lose what little we have circling with us? Are we not on a planet that is smaller than other's moons as well? Uh! grumble, grumble...

ok - stepping off the box now....

astronomer's struggle for recognition? We are discovering something new about our universe every year, today a dwarf, yesterday the planet pluto, a few years back the world was flat and before that moses's people made and worshiped a golden calf, one hundreds of years from now they will laugh at our atronomers while walking on the dwarf <biggrin...'good point' (~_~)

 

[wildsweetone]

O
grace
love
beauty
all of the
columns like siblings
holding up holy canopies
Doric, Ionic, Corinthian and Egyptian
not to mention the esques, the revivals. Point is it takes many to make a temple.

seemless! now see, this is what i was trying to do.

here's mine (that i deleted before because i couldn't make it do what you've managed...

0, 1, 1, 2, 3, 5, 8, 13, 21

you
know
it takes
two to do
a tango, the dance
where eyes do not meet, smiles are still.
Chests press close as lover demands love taking it all.
And you dance, statues moving, grooving to red and black music, hearts beating. Filled with life.



it's not how i initially wanted to write, oddly enough.

seems cliched and forced in comparison to yours CoS.

well done.

 

[cherries_on_snow]

seemless! now see, this is what i was trying to do.

here's mine (that i deleted before because i couldn't make it do what you've managed...



seems cliched and forced in comparison to yours CoS.

well done.

I'm glad you brought yours back WSO. The fact that you deleted it got me quite curious. I like yours, too. I'd just tighten it up a bit. I wonder how it would be with no punctuation and something other than grooving? (maybe just dashes where the last period was?) I like the idea of a tango poem anyway...still smiles, etc.

 

[wildsweetone]

I'm glad you brought yours back WSO. The fact that you deleted it got me quite curious. I like yours, too. I'd just tighten it up a bit. I wonder how it would be with no punctuation and something other than grooving? (maybe just dashes where the last period was?) I like the idea of a tango poem anyway...still smiles, etc.

thanks for your thoughts, much appreciated. i tend to stay clear of as much form poetry as i can as it's not really in my comfort zone. i might keep this and fiddle with it and see if i can smooth out the rough edges. actually, come to think of it i'm not sure a tango poem should have smooth edges. okay that's given me an idea.

 

[MsBug]

Thanks for the fun, HKS

Back
home.
The world
keeps spinning,
dizzying a few.
I may venture out later on,
to test the sand. Then off to feed a nagging hunger.
Feet firmly planted, enjoying food and drink guaranteed to merely lift my spirits.

 

[wildsweetone]

thanks for your thoughts, much appreciated. i tend to stay clear of as much form poetry as i can as it's not really in my comfort zone. i might keep this and fiddle with it and see if i can smooth out the rough edges. actually, come to think of it i'm not sure a tango poem should have smooth edges. okay that's given me an idea.

Oh
you
know it
takes two too
Tango dancing where
eyes do not meet, where smiles are still
chests press close and with a flick of the head the love race
begins, statues move to black and red music hearts beating filled with the life blood of dance.

 

[wildsweetone]

just had an eve moment and quoted myself, sorry.

 

[cherries_on_snow]

Oh
you
know it
takes two too
Tango dancing where
eyes do not meet, where smiles are still
chests press close and with a flick of the head the love race
begins, statues move to black and red music hearts beating filled with the life blood of dance.

Excellent! I like it much better. Isn't it fun to break out of that comfort zone?

 

[Remec]

I
did,
at one
time, enjoy
the safety that comfort
zones provided me whenever
it became necessary to withdraw inside such
and wait out the world until my comfort overflowed,
and I could sail home once more
the wind at my back,
and my heart
swollen
with
hope

 

[MsBug]

I
did,
at one
time, enjoy
the safety that comfort
zones provided me whenever
it became necessary to withdraw inside such
and wait out the world until my comfort overflowed,
and I could sail home once more
the wind at my back,
and my heart
swollen
with
hope

Look at the dustbunny go!
Gives me food for thought...counting back down.

BTW "swollen with hope", I like that.

 

[HotKittySpank]

I
did,
at one
time, enjoy
the safety that comfort
zones provided me whenever
it became necessary to withdraw inside such
and wait out the world until my comfort overflowed,
and I could sail home once more
the wind at my back,
and my heart
swollen
with
hope

OH JOY! i was waiting for someone to do this. love the shape. totally dig this dude, 'cause you returned 'back home' as you slid back down.

BIG smiles!!!

 

[HotKittySpank]

he
sits
alone
pondering
her eyes in new light
wondering, words brightly fading prick again with sting

…

time
means
nothing
without word
meantime, suggestions
roll nonsensically around this dirty deadpan brain

...

 

[eagleyez]

I
trip slightly
on peanut shells and sawdust
the jukeman and me hit it off right quick,
the sidewalks are perilous with ice and sweatered single girls,

one cop breezes by sippin his mud,
meanwhile, shell stored memories sound oceans
for I am alone
not interested in staggerqueens
medicated and stoley'd to their chairs.

"Got any Beck?" I ask
Nobody dancing anyway,
"Hell Yeah" he says.

"Guero?"

for you man, the whole thing.

from Memphis to New Orleans
Your out there in scenes passing by...