Femdom Distasteful?

[Angelick77]

I just posted a story that starts off with a strap-on FemDom scene. Admittedly, it's new, so I may have to see how it does overall as time goes on, but I've gotten some initial feedback that indicates a distaste for that sort of subject matter. I've always found those sort of scenes to be particularly interesting for me, so I was wondering if anybody else found either shares or disagrees with my opinion.

It could also be that my story sucks of course. Lol.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=286705

In case you're interested in seeing whether it's the subject matter, or just the storytelling.

 

[Chicklet]

I thought your story was pretty steamy.

One of the things about submitting a story is that you have to be ready for people that think they could have written it better, or that open it up and read it even if they're not interested in the subject matter. I got a lot of insulting emails along with my compliments when I was submitting my stories.

If you want a better critique, I'd check out the story feedback forum - they're good at giving advice on writing styles and such, but I for one thought yours was good as it was.

 

[SweetErika]

The good news is that the negative comment didn't say anything about the writing itself - it's not that person's (I'm guessing a middle-aged white male who has a victim mentality) preference, and that's okay.

There are always going to be trolls and people who don't like our writing. Some vote low and criticize just because it's well-written or has a high score; they're slimy little people who have nothing better to do with their time and often can't write themselves, so they take it upon themselves to bash others.

You wrote a good story in a niche that's not going to be everyone's cup of tea. Feed off of the positive, and ignore the negative that aren't constructive to your writing. You may want to put an author's note on pieces that aren't as mainstream--something to the effect of, "This story contains female domination, but does not reflect the author's opinion on gender equality. If that's not a subject you enjoy, feel free to back out of it now."--so readers can't say they weren't warned.

 

[serijules]

You call her Mistress Jade the first time and then switch to Mistress Jasmine.

The story is interesting and well written despite not being my cup of tea.

 

[Angelick77]

Good Catch!!!

My God, you're right! Haha... I had based that persona on an actual dominatrix I knew and thought that I ought to change her name... but then slipped right back into using her actual domme name instead!

I will post up a correction as soon as I am able.

To think, I reread that story over and over to try to pick out the grammatical mistakes and completely missed that!

D'oh!

 

[Angelick77]

You may want to put an author's note on pieces that aren't as mainstream--something to the effect of, "This story contains female domination, but does not reflect the author's opinion on gender equality. If that's not a subject you enjoy, feel free to back out of it now."--so readers can't say they weren't warned.

Thanks, I hadn't thought of doing that, but that's definitely something I'll be doing in the future on my more risque/experimental pieces of writing!

I was worried that I might have crossed some sort of unspoken line when I first started reading the negative comments and feedback, but it's good to know I'm not the only one.

 

[Bredon]

You could post this link too
http://www.fatalemedia.com/videos/bend_over_boyfriend.html

 

[FurryFury]

My God, you're right! Haha... I had based that persona on an actual dominatrix I knew and thought that I ought to change her name... but then slipped right back into using her actual domme name instead!

I will post up a correction as soon as I am able.

To think, I reread that story over and over to try to pick out the grammatical mistakes and completely missed that!

D'oh!

LOL!

I do that sort of thing ALL the time, no matter how hard I try. It drives me mad!

Fury

 

[LadyAria]

The anonymous feature will bring out the hateful in the most timid of moron.

Comes with the territory.

Every category attracts its own type of troll.

 

[RawHumor]

I love it when people read a story that has a description and a category, and then blast the author for writing such subject matter.

It's all part of the fun of public/private feedback features. It's good that you can't easily read the feedback before you read the story, so each reader gets to form his/her own opinion.

 

[Angelick77]

I understand why people would prefer to keep their identities secret; it's totally understandable given the types that creep around on the internet. It's a shame that people abuse the Anonymous option though. It's a cheap shot, to leave a message that emptily critisizes without giving the other person the ability to respond, defend or question why. If somebody is going to say something negative, they should at least have the gumption to own up to what they're saying by not hiding behind anonymity.

It's just cowardly.

Kind of makes me want to write something about an author's vengeance... or an internet troller getting their just comeuppance.

Hmmm...

 

[tiez]

The first chapter was very linear in it's telling. The second chapter, which is what you linked to, seemed to jump around a little time wise. While the other timeline in Chap 1 seemed smoother, I felt chapter two was abrupt and I felt myself working to catch up to where the story was at the time.

Beside all that, I loved the writing in Chapter 1 and much of the style of Chapter 2.

I supopse I should have read chapter 2 first, as you linked, perhaps I'd have a different opinion, but I did really like all that I read, just felt a little time shifted in the second one, that's all.

Please write more

 

[Aladylover]

Do not allow anyone to cticise your subject matter. We all have our own fantasies / quirks thats whats great about Literotica. A previous reply mentioned a caveat at the beginning "This story contains the following....If its not for you, then you may not enjoy, otherwise..." And I cannot advocate this strongly enough. My first couple of stories got hammered (one particular red-neck kept wanting to "do me" with his shotgun). I now routinely add a note at the start and it has almost eliminated the problem.

Keep writing - if you enjoy it (and I think you do), I for one am looking forward to your next story.

 

[Lester_Hammond]

I just posted a story that starts off with a strap-on FemDom scene. Admittedly, it's new, so I may have to see how it does overall as time goes on, but I've gotten some initial feedback that indicates a distaste for that sort of subject matter. I've always found those sort of scenes to be particularly interesting for me, so I was wondering if anybody else found either shares or disagrees with my opinion.

It could also be that my story sucks of course. Lol.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=286705

In case you're interested in seeing whether it's the subject matter, or just the storytelling.

Most people DO find femdom distasteful. But that doesn't stop me liking it. Do what you feel is right. If you're offended by it stay away from it.

 

[Ebonyfire]

Most people DO find femdom distasteful. But that doesn't stop me liking it.

Not in MY world! It is the norm.

Eb

 

[A_Kefka]

IF its the kind of thing you feel like writing about then don't worry is some people don't like it. A lot probably do, but I get the feeling they are more likely to just enjoy a story and not say anything, where as people who don't like something seem all to happy to waste their time telling you that.

Just enjoy writing and have fun with it.

 

[AvaAdore]

I liked it!

 

[Aeroil]

Most people DO find femdom distasteful. But that doesn't stop me liking it. Do what you feel is right. If you're offended by it stay away from it.

Most people suck.

Most people also aren't Aeroil

Not a coincidence!

I lieked the story ^_^

 

[Bayoububba]

I just posted a story that starts off with a strap-on FemDom scene. Admittedly, it's new, so I may have to see how it does overall as time goes on, but I've gotten some initial feedback that indicates a distaste for that sort of subject matter. I've always found those sort of scenes to be particularly interesting for me, so I was wondering if anybody else found either shares or disagrees with my opinion.

It could also be that my story sucks of course. Lol.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=286705

In case you're interested in seeing whether it's the subject matter, or just the storytelling.

Hi Angel, here on Lit we have an infestation of "trolls", who obviously have wayyyyyy to much time on their hands. Trolls will go around and post negative feedback, and bash your rating with a "1" vote. You have to simply write for you, if it feels right,and it flows, go with it. My series which was the first thing I submitted caught some negative comments, but overall the reception has been good. I hope to get a chance to check out your story shortly, and I will leave you a comment and vote. Take care, enjoy your stay, and welcome to Lit.

 

[Bayoububba]

I understand why people would prefer to keep their identities secret; it's totally understandable given the types that creep around on the internet. It's a shame that people abuse the Anonymous option though. It's a cheap shot, to leave a message that emptily critisizes without giving the other person the ability to respond, defend or question why. If somebody is going to say something negative, they should at least have the gumption to own up to what they're saying by not hiding behind anonymity.

It's just cowardly.

Kind of makes me want to write something about an author's vengeance... or an internet troller getting their just comeuppance.

Hmmm...

Sorry to double post, but I saw this blurt and wanted to echo what you said. I have started an erotic parody story about a "troll" and his pathetic misgivings that cause him to attack those with more talent than he. I think it is pretty funny, but I have to be in a pissy, spitefull mood to work on it. A way to purge venom, if you will.

 

[NurseRuth]

cold shower

I am sitting at work, browsing the boards for the first time ever and I ran across your post and then read your story.

I loved it. You wrote well and made me feel like I could reach out and touch your...characters. Rather wished I could reach out and touch myself, but that might be frowned upon, in a big way.

Ignore people who criticize your subject matter, it is YOUR subject and you write what ever turns you on/makes you tick.

 

[i_love_myself76]

Just read you story have to say wow very well done hun . left a comment so everyone could see it dont believe in being anonymus too much of a open person so feel free to pm if you want

 

[Mastersall]

GREAT TALE AND SUPERB EROTIC WRITING !!!


Loved all of it. Very inventive and erotic at same time. I began my sexual
odessey several years ago, trained by a Domme. I treasure that time with
her and being her submissive taught me to be a much better Dom.

Keep writing !