Female writers

[redrooster]

Hi everyone! This is first post I've made. I've been writing on Chyoo for a little while but only just cottoned on that the message boards were here on Literotica.

Are there many other of us girls out there?

 

[niceguy2002tim]

(Looks around)

Hello,
first I want to say welcome to Chyoo. As you can tell from my nickname, I am a guy. But, I am always happy to meet new people and welcome them to Chyoo. Also, invite them to read my stories. LoL, yes, that is a plug. If you're interested the links are below my signature. Welcome to Chyoo and the Lit Message Boards.

One last note, where might I find your writing?
-Tim (niceguy2002tim)

 

[bungakawa2000]

And to answer your question, I think there are 2 other female writers among the forum regulars... It's hard to guess for the whole Chyoo site though since not many people post here...

Bunga

 

[redrooster]

Thanks for your replies. I have one storie up and running at the moment: Anything is possible. I am trying to write this from a male point of view.

I have submitted two new stories for which I have already typed up quite a number of follow up threads.

I am finding that my stories are tending to focus on a bdsm or domination theme where women take the role of the dominated. I know this is not very politically correct but this is what interests/arouses me personally.

I have also just submitted the start to a Horro story: The dead come to walk. I love old be movies and thought the theme of sex crazed Zombies might be fun to persue ( even if a bit corny)

I have tried to include a link to my story:http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.cover/1276

I'd appreciate comments or new threads

Little

 

[niceguy2002tim]

Enjoying...

Hello,
well you want some opinions, so here goes. I am currently reading the story and am enjoying the red. The basis of the story is a great one to work by. The main character is the boss and a very successful business man. The options are limitless, and it definitely can include bsdm in your story.

The only probably I had is with the introduction. Normally when I read an introduction as short as yours I am immediately turned off. Seeing that there were 4 options to take, I continued on. The following thread was much longer and written much better. So that is my only complaint. The introduction could be longer to include more meat. Also, a little editing wouldn't help. If you need any help with anything let me know.

Other than that, the story is very good. A great read.

-Tim (niceguy2002tim)

 

[redrooster]

Thanks for your comments Tim. I'm going to go bacjk to my intro and see if I can expand it post your comment.

I've started a new story- I never meant to be so dirty:http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/14942/15185

The intro on this is long and I think you might enjoy it. I hope!

Little

 

[niceguy2002tim]

Great Introduction!

Hello,
well I am responding to your new story. I never meant to be so dirty. I very much enjoyed the introduction. And am looking forward to reading the rest of it. My only complain is that there is no option for taking things further with Heather. The two girl's have great chemistry. I have enjoyed this far and I would like to recomemnd this story to Gystex (I know you like the ladies! lol) and anybody else who enjoys two girls. Not saying anything more, don't want to give away everything.

Thanks,
Tim (niceguy2002tim)

 

[gystex]

Re: Great Introduction!

I have enjoyed this far and I would like to recomemnd this story to Gystex (I know you like the ladies! lol) and anybody else who enjoys two girls.

I discovered this story almost immediately after it was posted and fully intend to contribute!

 

[thegirl]

New to the Forum Section

Hello All:

I write, play games (LOL) and love reading the stories!

Just thought I would pop into a different section and check things out!

 

[AmericanWench]

Hello

Hi. I've been on Lit for about a month, but am just now venturing into Chyoo...
Now...can someone tell me what exactly the purpose of this is, and how it differs from the boards?

Thanks

 

[gystex]

Re: Hello

Hi. I've been on Lit for about a month, but am just now venturing into Chyoo...
Now...can someone tell me what exactly the purpose of this is, and how it differs from the boards?

Thanks

CHYOO is interactive fiction. Remember the "Choose Your Own Adventure" books? With CHYOO, you "CHoose Your Own Orgasm". You read the stories, making choices as you go, and you contribute to them. You can also come up with your own ideas and let others contribute, if they prove to be popular ideas.

I came up with a generally approved list of advice for CHYOOers, which I will reproduce here:



THINGS THAT APPLY TO THE STORY AS A WHOLE:

* Follow the rules set by CHYOO. It's their site, and they have final say.

* Do a little reading before doing any writing. Be aware of what's already been done. If you want to do something again that's already here, go ahead, but better to do something new and fresh.

* Make an effort to use proper English. Don't make your readers wade through a morass of bad grammar and creative spelling to get to the story underneath.

* Do not use underage characters. It is improper, disgusting, and morally wrong to do so, and against CHYOO's rules besides. We are not pedophiles, nor do we want anything to do with those who are.

* When it comes to sex, describe in detail. That is what we are here for.



THINGS THAT APPLY TO THE FIRST THREAD:

* The first thread is the key to the story. It sets the tone, creates the scene, grabs the reader's attention, and entices the writer to contribute. Put some effort into it. Don't just dash something off in two minutes and expect it to be any good.

* Make it long. Describe the characters and the setting, and make sure to clearly demonstrate what the story's plot is to be. Don't leave your readers wondering where you're going with it.

* On the other hand, don't tell the entire story in one thread. The introductory thread is just that, an introduction.

* The first choice is vitally important. The choices leading off from it should each lead to an interesting storyline. It shouldn't be a yes/no question where the answer is obviously "yes" because "no" would mean the end of the story.

* Follow up the first thread with more from your own hand. It's your story, after all, and if you don't submit to it, who will?

* While it is not necessary to include sex in the leading thread, it is generally best to lead the story in that direction from moment one.



WHEN SUBMITTING THREADS TO OTHERS:

* Read their guidelines before you submit. It will save headaches all around.

* Contact editors before submitting threads. They may be gone, and there's no point in writing a thread that will never be accepted or rejected due to te editor's absence.

* Use the same tense and point of view as the rest of the story.

* Write a decently long submission. A single sentence is not a thread.

* Be aware of what has happened in the threads leading up to yours. Do not contradict what has already been written.

* Leave a good hook if you want your thread to be followed up on. Remember, this is about choices. Don't end your thread with only a single logical path to follow at the end, make sure there is a crossroads.

* Alternately, if you feel you have reached a termination point, feel free to end the story. The editor can re-open the thread if he/she does not want it to end there.

* If your thread is rejected, do not become upset or agitated. It may simply not have been what the editor had in mind. Move on to another story if one editor ticks you off, there are plenty of them to choose from.



GENERAL ADVICE:

* Write threads in some other application like Notepad, Wordpad, etc. and then copy-paste them into CHYOO. If you try to write them directly into CHYOO, you could be timed out and lose your thread.

* When dealing with name insertion, the proper way to display the name in the story is {FIRST_NAME} for the first name and {LAST_NAME} for the last name. Be certain to use all caps and the proper punctuation, it is important.

* It is best to double-space between paragraphs. This will make your thread more readable.

* Write for yourself, not the editor or the readers. Write about what turns YOU on. You'll suffer from burnout if you try to please others above yourself.

* The best stories seem to be ones that are about something besides sex. Develop a plot. It doesn't have to be a very believable or involved plot, but something is better than nothing.

* When threads are submitted to your story, take the time to read them and ensure that they will fit properly. Being the editor is more than being a button-pusher. It's your story, be in charge of it. Most importantly, if you do reject a thread, be sure to tell the author why.

* Review and rate other people's threads, especially ones you like. We all like to receive praise.

* We have a polite, friendly, mutually respectful community here. Do not be a jerk. Those who are find out very quickly that they are not welcome around here.

* Have fun with it! That's what this place is for.




I hope this gives you some idea of what CHYOO is about!

 

[AmericanWench]

Not really...
But thanks anyway.

 

[bungakawa2000]

AmericanWench

Have you checked http://www.chyoo.com ? If you need more info after that, you should ask more precise questions...

Bunga

 

[AmericanWench]

I "checked" the page that the link from lit took me too. I also read some of the posts. Thank you though, should I decide I wish to learn more about this, I will indeed check out the link you gave me. I believe I did thank the previous person for their post? I will thank you as well.

 

[WattsIsnaim]

I have also just submitted the start to a Horro story: The dead come to walk. I love old be movies and thought the theme of sex crazed Zombies might be fun to persue ( even if a bit corny)

Kinda makesme think of aporono I saw with my wife when we werw first dating. We rented this videocalled, "Night of the Living Bed." I laughed so hard I almost burst. My wife did too, but she was like, "Pornos aren't supposed to be funny! I want more fucking!"

It does inclued the worst boob job I have ever seen on a woman. (Looked like a pair of beach balls glued to her chest. No jiggle at all!)

Anywho, you might find some inspiration from that, if you can find a place that has it. (I of cource made a copy from the rental, but that doesn't help you much.)